A True Rogue - Comments

This is a really interesting story.I'm very curious as to what
happened to make her pack turn on Rain. At this point it's really sad what happened to her from Alpha Emmery.Can't wait for the story to pick up more, the back story is much needed here and excited so see Rain after she becomes a rogue

@ Writerx11x I tried clearing that up by removing and reposting the chap, I hope it shows now thank you for telling me of this and for reading my story.

For whatever reason and I'm not sure if this is something you can fix but the last updated chapter your chapter 8 (chapter 11) by Mibba just automatically takes me back to the summary page for this story...

@ Death_to_Roses thank for alerting me of my mistake. I honestly didn't see cause on my side the chapter didn't show when I posted and I dumbly kept clicking away. After seeing this comment from you I did some rebooting and refreshing and voila! I fixed it and hope you like my story. Thank you again.

You uploaded chapter 8 multiple times.
I'm still trying to feel your story out, btw. :)

Thanks for checking out my story Michael and your suggestions is highly appreciated.

Summary: There are a few things you could fix to make it look better, but it's definitely interesting. I think the censorship of the word slut at the end is a bit silly considering you've already used it without censoring it. I also think that the last bit of the summary could be used as the short description, at least the first sentence of it.

Chapter 1: It's a good start. I think a bit more of back story as to why the pack might treat her like that, and why her parents wouldn't believe her would interest more people. As it stands now it's a lot of information about the character's situation, but not really why she is in it.

I also noticed that there were some grammar issues, but that could be easily fixed if you were to read it out loud to yourself, or have someone look it over for you.

I wish you luck with this though.