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This is awesome, again your detail is just spot on and everything flows through nicely. Great job!

@ xxoomwauhzxxoo

Thank you so much for the lovely comment

This is amazingly written. Im not even sure what to say other than well done ! Definitely want to check out your other stuff. The imagery was so vivid i felt like i was there!

@ steve rogers.

Aww, I think this comment may just make me cry As in, I literally do not know what to say right now I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, and that I was able to do you justice as a human being and not make you feel weird/creepy for including you in this I'm also really, really happy that you felt like I did a decent job of incorporating Finn's personality and staying true to him as a character in this because that's one of those things I was really iffy about since I've never been able to relate to him as much or get inside his head like I can with some of the other characters on the show.

As for all the insanely accurate soul sister stuff, that makes me ridiculously happy Clearly, my Bridgette vibes are totally on-point, what can I say?

And I'll go in and add that space you pointed out right now since I'm not really doing anything! Thank you so much for the amazing and thought-out comment You're a doll.

I'm having so many feelings about this. The layout was perfect - especially the small detail about his shirt; mirroring the title image - the summary was capturing, and the actual content? Ah! This whole thing feels very Nicholas Sparks - sweet, perfect wording, perfect pictures. It's like I'm watching a movie and listening to an older woman recount perfect moments as the memories float across the screen.

"Because being with him was like catching glimpses of life through a View-Master" I love when people make me feel like this - and I've never been able to describe it. I swear, your writing and soul-sister abilities amaze me too often. And seriously, if I could find someone to share a milkshake and play oldies on a jukebox, I'd just die. That's perfect.

What makes this Finn Collins so perfect here is how he's got such a personality - gentleman, true to himself, artist, and then he's shown to be vulnerable. Nodding nervously in response to going up? That's just so precious and so real. Sunflowers, coffee, lemon cookies, the scent of pine; such small details, but so specific and personal.

Being with him was like the day after that final winter thaw, when the woodlands and meadows are swarming with activity and vivaciousness and all the creatures peek out to greet the sun and bask in its warmth. Such a simple thing to tie back to her/my previous thoughts, the repetition making everything feel more powerful.

Every word here was amazing - the perfect amount of sweetness, sexiness, and class. The deed itself something I've never found myself interested in reading, but there was something about how this was written. Sex wasn't the main focus, and when it was focused on, it wasn't over the top. I think the best part was when it lead from his feelings, to the other room. Your phrases about the words, landmark moments, storms, the kiss continuing; utterly brilliant. And even better is I wore a black sundress with sunflowers printed onto it for my graduation. There's also a (faded and dusty) turquoise dreamcatcher that my dad made, hanging above my bed. So another couple #SoulSister moments making this absolute perfection.

Not to mention, the endless mentions of art and simplistic beauty tie this altogether: a work of art.

And there was literally only one mistake: “I think…”he began - there was no space between the punctuation and "he." Thank you so much for writing something so beautiful for me