This is so cute, I love Lincoln and Octavia so much. You wrote them super well too, that's exactly how I would imagine them if Octavia was actually pregnant. Lincoln would definitely be annoying and talk to her stomach and it would be the most adorable thing ever.
I like how to-the-point your writing is. It isn't super flowery and crazy descriptive, and I think that works super well for this story. It felt like it was more focused on the dialogue which is what really made the story so awesome.
This is so cute, I love Lincoln and Octavia so much. You wrote them super well too, that's exactly how I would imagine them if Octavia was actually pregnant. Lincoln would definitely be annoying and talk to her stomach and it would be the most adorable thing ever.
I like how to-the-point your writing is. It isn't super flowery and crazy descriptive, and I think that works super well for this story. It felt like it was more focused on the dialogue which is what really made the story so awesome.
Bah, I just loved this so much. SO CUTE.