Woman of the Sea - Comments

Mind reading!! Oh snap.
That's an interesting turn of events.

I love it so far! Can't wait to see what happens!

Good first chapter! Your writing is really good. Easy to follow and descriptive. I'm not scratching my head going what the heck does she mean by that....
My only suggestion would be to introduce some conflict. Our girl seems very chipper and I'm waiting for the angst. Please continue though.