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  • Meronean

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    Mind reading!! Oh snap.
    That's an interesting turn of events.
    September 6th, 2015 at 05:05am
  • TheNonchalantReader

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    I love it so far! Can't wait to see what happens!
    August 15th, 2015 at 02:59am
  • Meronean

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    Good first chapter! Your writing is really good. Easy to follow and descriptive. I'm not scratching my head going what the heck does she mean by that....
    My only suggestion would be to introduce some conflict. Our girl seems very chipper and I'm waiting for the angst. Please continue though. Very Happy
    August 14th, 2015 at 04:36am
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