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  • ThePast_IsReal

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    Aww I loved the end :3
    I really like how you depicted Loki as someone who understood her and wouldn't pressure her to give him "the heir and a spare". I also really like how you threw in him wondering if he could have fixed the other future!! That was awesome. I'm so sad this is over but the ending was perfect
    February 12th, 2016 at 10:35am
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    @ KerberosSmoke
    I'm glad you approve. :)
    I really tried to point this in a direction that made sense. Truthfully it's not fully how I plotted it. I came across many roadblocks along the way. :( but I pushed through!
    February 11th, 2016 at 08:58pm
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    @ ThePast_IsReal
    Thanks! I love the little details. I mean the way we act is based on our experiences. The two futures were very different. :)
    February 11th, 2016 at 08:55pm
  • KerberosSmoke

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    @ Yasumi
    I agree, but the way you slowly being it upon him in a revaluation manner fits Loki. He's not rushing head long and love at first aight. It very slow and something that happens gradually that make the story so good.
    February 6th, 2016 at 05:20am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    She played right into his hands and she doesn't even know it! I love how you put in him noticing differences in her personality from the current future verses how she was in the old future on Earth! Please update soon
    February 6th, 2016 at 12:03am
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    @ ThePast_IsReal
    So much!! Update is here!
    February 5th, 2016 at 08:34pm
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    @ KerberosSmoke
    I'm glad you like my version of Loki. It's hard to keep him completely in character as he's not much of a caring man in the comics and we don't get to see him romantically in the movies. So glad you're enjoying yourself!
    February 5th, 2016 at 08:33pm
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    OH MY GOODNESS SO MICH HAPPENINGS PLEASE UPDATE SOON
    February 5th, 2016 at 10:45am
  • KerberosSmoke

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    bwa ha ha ha, I love your stories. Krystoff is such a jerk, the way you write Loki is great! I can't wait for your updates! YAY!
    February 5th, 2016 at 05:11am
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    @ ThePast_IsReal
    It's always nice when things fall properly in line. The future is brighter than the last one that's for sure. :)
    February 2nd, 2016 at 10:28pm
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    Aww yay!!!! Everything is falling into place!! Please update soon
    January 31st, 2016 at 05:34am
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    @ Yasumi
    Well we know Odin was fair he just is a douche sometimes lol
    January 31st, 2016 at 05:20am
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    @ ThePast_IsReal
    Odin is t too much of an ass after all. Who'd have thought! Lol
    January 29th, 2016 at 11:52pm
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    UGGGGG!!!! So brilliant!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see what happens now that Odin is gonna help Loki become king!!
    January 27th, 2016 at 09:04am
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    @ ThePast_IsReal
    Of course he has a plan. He has to make sure he wins, no matter what. :p
    January 27th, 2016 at 12:25am
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    YAY HE HAS A PLAN TO GET HER!!! Can't wait for the next update!!
    January 22nd, 2016 at 07:25am
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    @ ThePast_IsReal
    You're too kind. You stroke my little ego... Update delivered.
    January 21st, 2016 at 10:38pm
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    Oh my gosh this is brilliant!!!! Ugg I can't wait to read what happens next!! Please update soon!
    January 20th, 2016 at 08:31am
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    @ ThePast_IsReal
    All in good time my dear. :)
    January 19th, 2016 at 10:04pm
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    HE NEEDS TO GO FIND HER!!!
    January 15th, 2016 at 10:36am
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