Through the Eyes of the Broken - Comments

@ shelbyvengeance
Ah that's cool, romance and Derek is great as well... I love writing romance stories for him lol

@ The Alpha's Angel
Ahh, I already have a romance between them planned which would be explained. And thank you. I plan on continuing it, just haven't had any motivation to write.

I'm loving this! I was only going to read the first five chapters but I got hooked and read all of them. The relationship between Chloe and Derek is great, and I think in terms of where it should go, it'll be nice to see a strong brother/sister bond rather than romance bewteen them.

I really think that this story is going to get really interesting and I will definitely be sticking around to see what you have planned for it. I'm surprised that this doesn't have more comments, because its good.

Don't let the lack of comments discourage you. Can't wait to see where you take this and how Derek's relationship with Chloe will progress. Nice job so far!