August 24th, 2015 at 03:46am
i don't even think i can pick my favorite part of this oneshot, it's all so wonderful. every bit of detail adds together to make a wonderful read and i'm in deep love, ahhhhh.
". . .skinny, shirtless, and tattooed, sitting on a bench with his head bent over the guitar in his lap, his mop of curly hair hiding his face." geez what a hipster nerd pfft.
BWAHAHAHAHAHA HOLDING UP A 'W' WITH HIS FREE HAND I HATE THIS
I TAKE IT BACK I THINK I FOUND MY FAVORITE PART THAT FRIGGIN' WEST SIDE SIGN I'M GONNA CRY"A flash of a round bum in tight jeans surged from his memories. He avoided shaking his head as he cursed his drunk self." me i am liam and liam is me.
all the post-its everywere are so cute oh my goodness i love it i love it i love it
oops just as liam was about to leave and maybe put it together like a puzzle on his own without any embarrassment HI I'M THE SOUND OF A LOCK COMING TO SCARE YOU OUT OF YOUR WITS
and bam post-it man is here and i love it and that strip of skin and remembering???? it under his hand ohhhh 
i adore this i'm telling you.
HE WAS CELEBRATING LIFE HOW CUTE IS THAT THAT'S ADORABLE OH MY GOODNESS. this whole awkwardness that liam is experiencing as louis is recounting the night is just so cute so cute so cute and he trIED TO ROTATE ON HIS LIL STOOL TO FOLLOW LOUIS AROUND AW.
"I put my number under my name but you changed it, giggled like a four-year-old, and refused to tell me what it was when I asked. Then you showed it to Harry who, although completely sober, also giggled like a four-year-old and refused to tell me.” now before i reached the end of this story, i knew it had something to do with the butt. as soon as liam looked at it, he thought of the butt. why would he think of the butt if it did not involve the butt? precisely.
and then i got to the end and i sobbed with laughter anD LOUIS DON'T WORRY YOU'LL FIND OUT IT'S OKAY NO SQUINTY-SQUINTS SHH.
the little game louis came up with is so damned clever i hate him so much that's so smart and such a good excuse to get all close to the cute guy at the bar helloooooo.
AW LOUIS WON'T MEET HIS EYES LOOK UP LIL MUFFIN.
meepmeepmeep the thank yous i'm in pain how cute aND now he's showing liam the little game byebyebyebyebye oH MY NOW IT'S GETTING SOMEWHERE OH HI THERE HOTNESS WHERE DID YOU COME FROM??? OH. OH HEY. HEY THERE. IT'S HOT AND YET IT'S STILL SO ADORABLE HOW PRECIOUS IS THIS VERY THAT'S HOW PRECIOUS.
louis's pout is very endearing 10/10 confirmed
THE NOBLE THING TO DO IS TO WAIT FOR SOMEONE TO WAKE UP BEFORE MURDERING THEM.
OH WAIT MY FAVORITE PART GUARANTEED.
"I'm sorry?" Louis asked, now leaning forward.
"Big Booty," Liam said in an indignant huff.
At Louis’s squeal of laughter, Liam threw Louis’s t-shirt at his face."
I'M SFUESIGTSEIG MEMEMEME I WOULD DEFINITELY SAVE HIM IN MY PHONE UNDER THAT LIKE HAVE YOU SEEN HIM THO. that-that was amazing i can't.oh sounds like niall's a little attached too i mean you can't not get attached to loUIS OH FNEUSWITKSENE WHAT'S THE NAME PAYNO IHJRI OH MY GDO LIAM JUST TAKE THE PHONE CHANGE IT BEFORE THIS HAPPENS AGAIN
this was adorable and so funny and got a lil heated there for a second hello
but i absolutely loved it and it was just so good and i haven't read a good lengthy lilo oneshot in a nice while so this was heavenly. you did amazing! wonderful job!
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback!! I'm glad you enjoyed it