Definitely wouldn't mind a guy looking at me like the way you described him in this, "He turned towards her, his eyes unblinking, as he tried to drink in the scene in front of him."
ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CRY. THIS WAS BEYOND ADORABLE, LIZZ. I'm calling it now. Queen of Romance
Your descriptions are out of this world! Hence, your writing is pure loveliness! Absolutely loved reading this. Short, simple, effective. You've perfectly described a moment of a relationship that we all crave for because it's just so endearing. Great job!
ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CRY. THIS WAS BEYOND ADORABLE, LIZZ. I'm calling it now. Queen of Romance
A1 DESCRIPTIONS, CHARACTERS, LAYOUT AHHH.