She's the Realest - Comments

Summary:
The summary is already so sweet and I'm so excited to read it. I love the emotion you put into it!

One/One:
In just the first few paragraphs the love and admiration Zachary feels for Halsey is completely obvious and absolutely adorable. I love the image and descriptions you used/created for this piece.
Their first meeting sounds so adorable and cute! I'd like to see a movie where the two main characters meet that way.
The fact that they don't see one another for four years must've really hurt Zack for a while.
I love the fact that you focused on Zack's obsession with her. Usually it's from the female's perspective, so this was so refreshing to read and made me so so happy.
He didn’t make her purple. She wanted to be purple. I absolutely loved this line!

This entire one-shot was perfection. I loved everything about it. The descriptions, the flow, everything. I didn't see a single mistake and everything was so smooth. Well done!

Cute. Adorable. Amazing. Only a few words that I can think of to describe this short story. I was thinking that something bad was going to happen to her since it started out with describing her. I don't know, maybe I'm so accustomed to the person that they love dying or leaving them that I just thought it would happen in this one too. Boy was I happy when that didn't happen because I would have been sad.

But no, this was just a cute, simple one-shot that made me smile throughout the whole thing. Their whole relationship was wonderful, and my favorite part was when she asked him if if purple was for him. And then the background behind the question was added, which is awesome because it is weird question to ask, especially if you don't know the background or song behind it, in this case.

I don't know what else to say about this other than I absolutely loved it!

Four words: You Are A GOD! This story is dinner! This is the kind of story I have been longing for for years! It flows, the chemistry between the two characters is so believable I feel the love deep in my heart! I need this story to be a part of my life, like a third child! That is how deeply I feel about this story! I love it and I love you for this story!

Oh my goodness. This is fricking adorable. Like.

Ah my heart. The hole has been filled. It is complete.
But it needs more of this perfection like my goodness.

I love your opening paragraph. It feels so dreamy, I just got lost in it. Like I went into this frame of mind where I was lost in your words, lost in the image of Halsey and who she is.

I also like how you've got a lot of real world references and a few explanations for people who haven't heard of Halsey (but also enough for those who do to know). It's the perfect balance.

Also, can I just say I love how he's all for her even though she's 16 when he's 23? Honestly that made me feel so good. The relo acceptance. Like hell yeah. I like how you didn't just glaze over that.

Lovestruck!Zack really is the best Zack. Like awh. I can just picture him fawning over her.

(i was really really hoping this was the fic you were talking about when you said you wrote a thing I AM SO EXCITED )

"In the world’s eyes, Halsey was an ethereal goddess and he couldn’t agree more." UM YES???? why is zack so freaking lovestruck and deep in his feelings for her oh my god this is so precious and we've just started out my heart is going to explode.

hO WCUTEUSHIT EAHTU HOW CUTE IS ZACK AND ALL HIS THINKING ABOIUT HIS BABY GIRL HALSEY UGHUGHUGH and jesus the memory of their first meeting is so she pushed him to do more of the talking sh E PUSHED MY SWEET MUFFIN ZACK TO SPEAK AND LISTENED TO HIM AND LISTENED GOOD AND AHYTU3AQTUSEWGT4E8TG3SWEHFBAU I'M DEAD I'M DEAD I'M DEAD.

ahhhhhh your description lemme just swoon as always okay?

" Each day they spent with each other, he realized how strong her influence was and that some of her personality had mixed into his." ALIYA DON'T YOU DO THIS. DON'T YOU TELL ME HOW THEY'RE BLENDING AND BEING EXTRA CUTE I CAN'T HANDLE THIS KIND OF ADORABLE ZACK LOVES HER SO MUUUUUCH HE LOVES HER HE LOVES HER HE LOVES HER i'm gonna go crawl in a hole because he loooooves her he's infatuated i'm disgusted

"...is purple for you?"


HOW VERY DARE YOU.

hetfjwanfries fhe called her ashley he called her ashley i'm gonna go jump out of a building and let the feels break my fall because i'm going to go away and sob forever. ntu4hsyruhgsuh bgvsuvjtnOOOONONPENOPE THE PARAGRAPH ABOUT HOW ZACK SEES HER I'M GOING TO GO I'M GONE GOODBYE.

"...I want to be purple forever."
i'm dead goodbye

THAT "DRIVE" REFERENCE THO I'M DECEASED I TOLD YOU TNFUAEHGTEUSIHTESITHERE WAS NO WAY SHE WAS REAL BUT SHE WAS YOU'RE DAMN RIGHT SHE WAS THIS IS SO CUTE THIS IS SO CUTE THIS IS SO CUTE

you have killed me once again. thank you. :)))))

(seriously this was so nice and so cute and i'm so happy this is a thing that exists, this is amazing )

I love this so much, it's such a cool idea! :)

OHMYGOD I AM ABOUT TO READ THIS! :D