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  • Join the Masquerade

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    Not a huge fan of Manson unfortunately :/
    I hope your writers block goes away soon :)
    March 24th, 2016 at 01:49pm
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    @ Join the Masquerade
    Hello! And thank you! :)

    Yea, I seem to be suffering from writers block, kind of, for this story - anything that I write just doesn't really feel right :( I'm trying and hopefully I'll feel more focused again soon!

    I am messing about with a Marilyn Manson inspired fic atm, are you a fan? :)

    Anyways I can see that you've updated Crush Crush so I'm gonna skip off and have a little read now Mr. Green
    March 24th, 2016 at 10:43am
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    I fiiiiiinally got around to reading this and it's brilliant. I'm super interested in what the hell happened between now and then between Elfie and Gerard. And why she's bothering to go to his gig after he was so cold to her on the phone the last time they spoke. And I remember she moved. Maybe that's why he was all upset...

    I can see you haven't updated in a while but I hope you continue this at some point in the future :)
    March 22nd, 2016 at 08:06pm
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    @ deathXbeforeXdisco
    Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green the fact that you screamed has literally made my day, you have know idea :') and does your boyfriend not understand the importance of fanfiction?? :') hahah

    Yea, I worked it out as about 5 or six, so with them not being on good terms and all, writing the next part was very... interesting o_O and wow, no way??! That's super weird man, but cool! Hello to your friend Tasha! Mr. Green

    Thank you, that means a lot :) and those sayings are very true, and helpful <3 thank you for reviewing, as always :)
    October 29th, 2015 at 10:29pm
  • deathXbeforeXdisco

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    I swear, when I saw this was in my subscription list, I screamed. And my boyfriend looked at me like I was deranged.
    Any who.

    So her going home didn't help? I mean with trying to kill herself 3 times in the one year...
    How many years have they been apart? 6?
    Either way, I'm so excited to read on and see how they react when they meet again :3
    P.S. I have a friend called Tasha who is blonde and is studying counseling, so it was kinda cool to meet Elfie's therapist :P

    Also I'm sorry to hear things haven't been great for you. I hope they get better for you soon :) my favourite little sayings to get me through things is "The night is always darkest before the dawn" and "I am not afraid to keep on living" :)
    I completely agree with you saying that writing is easier when the brain is messy :) it's actually my favourite time to write.
    October 26th, 2015 at 07:40am
  • flowersonmygrave

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    Hey!!
    Your first chapter great!
    Curious what is going to happen between elfie and gerard
    October 24th, 2015 at 09:01pm
  • Lexi Wombat

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    Im so happy the first chapter is up!! I really can't wait for more, Elfie and Gerard's relationship is entrancing.
    October 24th, 2015 at 06:43pm
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    @ deathXbeforeXdisco
    Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green

    Ah, I agree, 100 percent. I haven't even started writing the story, and I'm not sure if this is good or bad! I have a strong plot in mind, but still undecided on how to write it out! I think that when I'm sure about how I want it to go then I'll start writing, but I know what you mean! I have started countless stories that I've simply jumped into far to quickly and sadly ended up scarping them because it just didn't feel right Sad

    Which brings me to my next point; I need to read some of your stories! I hardly ever have time to read anymore with working a lot D:

    Ah, yes, Noel Fielding! I have actually written a mini fic for him, it's nothing more than four chapters of drabble if I'm honest, but I was sort of thinking of adapting it to make something with a tad more structure :) it's on my page if you're interested :)

    Okay, I'm off to check out your page now tehe x x x
    September 13th, 2015 at 07:43pm
  • deathXbeforeXdisco

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    Eek! So glad this is up! Plus even more keen for the actual story In Love

    One word of advice, don't feel pressured to jump straight into the sequel. Just go along as per usual :) I had a story and I had a fairly large following who were very keen for the sequel and in the end I jumped into it and, to be honest, wrote an abysmal 25 chapters before deleting it.
    I'm not saying you can't do it or anything, just, do it in your own time. When you're ready, that's all ^_^

    Any who... KEEN! Subbed and recc'd and ready when you are... and interested to meet The Mighty Boosh ' s Noel Fielding tehe
    September 13th, 2015 at 12:16pm
  • deathXbeforeXdisco

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    Eek! So glad this is up! Plus even more keen for the actual story In Love

    One word of advice, don't feel pressured to jump straight into the sequel. Just go along as per usual :) I had a story and I had a fairly large following who were very keen for the sequel and in the end I jumped into it and, to be honest, wrote an abysmal 25 chapters before deleting it.
    I'm not saying you can't do it or anything, just, do it in your own time. When you're ready, that's all ^_^

    Any who... KEEN! Subbed and recc'd and ready when you are... and interested to meet The Mighty Boosh ' s Noel Fielding tehe
    September 13th, 2015 at 12:15pm
  • flowersonmygrave

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    Your a great writer i just know this one will be just as good as found missing!
    Can't wait for the first chapter
    September 5th, 2015 at 12:30am