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  • ashleylove

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    looooovee!!!!!! Please write more!
    October 25th, 2015 at 03:20pm
  • AJ9

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    This is brilliant. Please update this again very soon xxx
    October 24th, 2015 at 08:50am
  • CrystalBlueDisguise

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    More more more!!! I love it. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
    And curse you for ending the chapter like that :-D
    October 24th, 2015 at 02:47am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    October 1st, 2015 at 06:51pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ CharlieHunnam

    Her bestie does seem pretty rad. :)
    October 1st, 2015 at 06:50pm
  • CharlieHunnam

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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    of course you are! i wonder why?? i can't wait to see more of her best friend, too ;)
    September 30th, 2015 at 03:36am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I like getting pieces of the back story throughout. Mr. Green I'm particularly excited for the part about meeting this other band that I'm actually a total fan-girl over. Wink
    September 30th, 2015 at 02:17am
  • CrystalBlueDisguise

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    Very intrigued with this story. Cannot wait for more!!
    September 30th, 2015 at 12:51am
  • Myl

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    Hm interesting, wonder how this will turn out
    Can't wait to read the next chapter
    September 28th, 2015 at 11:56pm
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    Hm interesting, wonder how this will turn out
    Can't wait to read the next chapter
    September 28th, 2015 at 11:56pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Update soon and a bit longer I hope!
    September 24th, 2015 at 06:24am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    September 16th, 2015 at 01:17am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Whoops!
    September 16th, 2015 at 01:16am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Real classy, Bri, getting drunk and going to see your mistress and hitting her with THAT piece of news...Guess the alcohol helped him sack up and make a decision. Lol. You know I can't wait for more!
    September 16th, 2015 at 01:16am
  • simply amanda;

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    I really love this and can't wait to see more!
    September 14th, 2015 at 10:11pm
  • CharlieHunnam

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    @ Damsel of Darkness
    I appreciate your comment! I like to comment as I read, too. I feel like I really get all of what I wanna say out! I'm glad that you subscribed! Hopefully you won't be disappointed!!
    September 14th, 2015 at 02:43am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Hopefully the next chapter is a bit longer!
    September 12th, 2015 at 08:32am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    So I stumbled across this when someone in my friends list recommended it and I was intrigued by the summary. I subscribed and was pleasantly surprised to see the first chapter had been posted today Smile I'm one of those people that write my comment as I read, so be prepared for some possibly disjointed thoughts. Haha.

    Nurses are so underrated. Just from the brief description of her day to day life, you clearly have to be a really strong person emotion, mentally and of course physically to handle such a demanding role. Kudos to all the nurses out there! Haha.

    Well she certainly deserves a couple days of veging out! Although how she didn't just up and pass out right then and there on the couch, I don't know... Hahaha.

    Uh-oh... So he's leaving the wife. That's a bomb. Or maybe it's not. I wonder if he says this a lot? Like most guys who cheat on their wives... "I'm gonna leave her, it's just not the right time." Kind of deal. Or if this is a completely new situation. Hmmm... So many questions.

    I'm looking forward to learning more about their relationship and the dynamics. I also look forward to seeing why he's leaving Michelle (is it for Braelynn or other reasons?) and if it actually happens.

    Anyways, looking forward to the next update!
    September 12th, 2015 at 06:57am
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