Hello! Have to check that second scene though when Izzy felt dizzy since I think that the names were mixed up when it was supposed to Billie's name not hers.
Yehey! Another one-shot! I really like it, you are a 'weird' author, you have a lot of ides which makes the readers interested. Just the part in the beginning quite cliche.
i love your writing, it's hard to explain but it makes me emotional! like you describe feelings so well it's like i feel what the characters are feeling. i can understanfd the pain and hurt as well as the excitment and pure joy they experience. just wow.
Both of your stories, turned out great! It's good to read stories that doesn't have cliche endings. I love it, although I was hoping it turned out differently, but what I want is rather cliche, so erase that thought. LOVE YOUR STORIES!
Awww... I like your story. It's cool, and, it's not cliche. I really like it! So good to the max! Cant wait to read your other one shots about love! BRAVO!