September 10th, 2015 at 10:25pm
@ Lady Nikki Nightmare
Computers have their good days and bad days. Thank you for subscribing :)
It's Just That - Comments
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September 10th, 2015 at 10:25pm
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@ tentail
Mine has its good and bad days too. :) I still subscribed!September 10th, 2015 at 08:38pm -
@ Lady Nikki Nightmare
Yeah my computer doesn't always catch things. I'll try to work on it later.September 10th, 2015 at 06:55pm -
Some of it is awkward. In a few places you have lesson when I'm pretty sure you meant listen. you say bar teeth when you mean bared. The story over all seems interesting, but give the chapter a re-read to fix some of the weird wording.September 10th, 2015 at 06:01pm
Computers have their good days and bad days. Thank you for subscribing :)