Take Good Care of My Baby - Comments

  • ak9_sh

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    Another thought. I really love the way you keep their equation very real and undramatic. Many times crazy fans like us (esp. me) hope for major plot scenes where immediately something happens and they go from hating each other or being friends to being madly in love. Hell I hope for that in each chapter. The closest you have come to that happening is the one after Molly's birthday where they nearly kissed. There also you tortured and teased us more :P
    I also felt that on the end of the prequel, I felt that the end was just perfect and just how Cris and Molly would react.

    Which is why I find this fascinating. I know this will not go like some sappy rom com, which always keeps me wondering what next. How will they now go to the next level. More so, what does Molly really want. Does she even like or want Cris like that. Molly is such a mystery. So yes, you have me majorly hooked to this one.

    Also, though I don't know Cristiano personally obviously, but this Cris seems more like the real Cris than the other fanfics I have read elsewhere, including your other one as well. He does not come across as a love sick puppy to me, he seems more like the Cris here, which makes this more real and believable. It feels like I am really reading about Cristiano Ronaldo. And because I love him, I love this even more :)

    Now I am not sure whether I have made much sense, but just thought of saying it. Esp. the last thought has been on my mind since I started reading this story..
    September 6th, 2016 at 08:16pm
  • ak9_sh

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    I am both happy and sad. Happy coz of what they have (which they both don't realise yet) and sad coz of Molly's pain. It's a trend with most of your updates recently, they leave me so conflicted :)

    I just hope Cris doesn't screw up now...The journey from now to where they could be should be phenomenal I hope. Man I love them and I love this story.

    P.S - The song was such an amazing titbit into their equation, loved it :)
    September 6th, 2016 at 07:50pm
  • ak9_sh

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    Waiting ardentky, desperately, madly. I am craving for more Cris-Molly
    September 4th, 2016 at 07:39am
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    My heart goes out to Molly..She has been through all of this only because of her parents and they don't give a shit about her. How I hope there is more to it and they moved to finally make something of their lives.

    So glad to see Luke snapping, hope he completely screws up soooon :D

    There is something about them (Cris and Molly) which is so sweet, so natural and just clicks. They are so meant for each other. I know I said that I wasn't happy about Molly forgiving him this soon, but moments like these melt my heart. I wish Cris was in Manchester and I wish Molly had gone straight to Cris after this. And I hope so very much that it is him that she has called.

    I am waiting to see the following showdowns:

    1. Molly and Luke - My intuition still says he is not all good
    2. Cris and Irina - Can not at all wait for this one, long pending :))
    3. Cris and Olga - I hope she screws up on Junior soon. I keep feeling she is some shady character who Irina just picked up from anywhere.

    P.S. - Every time I read an update, I wish more and more that I was reading it an year later, or that it was a book. Waiting for an update is such a torture :(
    September 1st, 2016 at 09:26am
  • HawkGurl93

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    I hope she called Christiano, I bet she did. And I think he'll be really sweet to her through this
    August 31st, 2016 at 09:14pm
  • ak9_sh

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    Man I am so conflicted..I want things to be better between them obviously and I understand Molly may be going easy on him coz of Junior...But I am so pissed with Cris for his behavior that this seems like a very easy route for him...way way too easy...calling her Mols again bothered me.

    I have a feeling Luke is going to give out to Molly for meeting Cristiano...I will pray for a fight :)
    August 26th, 2016 at 07:27pm
  • ak9_sh

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    I am so addicted to this, I was going crazy all this while waiting for the updates. Soo many things to talk about:

    1. Overall super sweet chapter, love the bond between Molly and Junior
    2. Sweet yet sneaky move by Cris to bring Junior along, he knew he wouldn't get an entry otherwise
    3. Love how sassy Molly was in the comment about Russians, well played
    4. There was a certain vulnerability and honesty about Cris here. He is still scratching the surface though, he has to confront himself on why he was angry that night - because he was jealous - but he hasn't understood that yet or refuses to admit the same
    5. A part of me felt that Molly was maybe too lenient with him. Yes she was too overwhelmed to see junior but one apology counts for nothing, this was only the first step. He can not be let off the hook just like that. He went too far, yet again, after promising never to do this. He should pay for this a lot more
    6. So glad to see a chapter minus irina and Luke and with these two darlings of mine. Please send both f them far, far away..together...:))

    Loved it, loved every bit of it. Please don't make us wait for this long for the update, esp at this stage of the story...pls update soon.

    Thanks much for another awesome chapter..
    August 22nd, 2016 at 09:05pm
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    He have to send Irina away from his life! She is the cause of all problems....
    August 22nd, 2016 at 08:02pm
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    Please im begging you to update !!!!
    August 22nd, 2016 at 12:20pm
  • ak9_sh

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    Aaaaaah this is torture....cold blooded torture...pleaaase update..
    August 20th, 2016 at 02:59pm
  • ak9_sh

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    Goddd, I hope it's Cris at the door. I hope he has brought Junior with him. I hope when he sees Molly and junior together he realises what his happiness truly is. God I need Molly and Cris together, these two are so meant for each other. They fight, they make up, they are both stubborn, but they are both so cute sometimes. Cris just needs that moment to realise what he wants and how he will get that, given how royally he has screwed up. The journey from here to there is what I am most excited about, coz I really don't see Molly forgiving him at this moment. But forgiving him is one thing, and going on to more than that is another thing altogether.

    I love them. I love this story. I temporarily hate Cris but I know I can't do that for long. Please make him do something which makes me not hate him, in fact which makes me love him again.

    I can not wait for Irina and Luke to disappear. Well Irina is a bitch and we know that already. Her time is up sooner or later, hopefully sooner. But I keep feeling there is something fishy about Luke. I will go delirious with happiness if that is the case.

    Also, what the hell is this surprise that Luke is talking about? If it has anything to do about him moving in or God forbid proposing to Molly, I will go berserk :((
    August 15th, 2016 at 06:02pm
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    CAn't wait to find out who is at the door! I'm thinking it's Cris...I hope it is!!
    Thanks for the frequent updates, please keep them coming xx
    August 14th, 2016 at 08:17pm
  • ak9_sh

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    This hurts. They are getting used to her being away. His family is warming up to him (hate this part the most). She is getting used to being away. Gradually this will become a routine and then end of story. Irina wins, Luke wins, everybody else loses. Somebody kill me please.
    August 14th, 2016 at 09:13am
  • HawkGurl93

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    Love how Molly is still looking out for Christiano. Good for Pepe for sticking up to him. I wonder though, does junior go with katia to see Molly? I do want her to come around for a visit!
    August 12th, 2016 at 09:09pm
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    My feelings are so mixed up! i don't know anymore if I want them together... He is doing so many things wrong..
    August 12th, 2016 at 08:59pm
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    I want Christiano to confess to Pepe what he did, about the whole plan. And then at the end of it come to realize he loves Molly. But that might be too perfect of a scenario. I also want irina to go away lol. Love
    August 11th, 2016 at 12:04am
  • ak9_sh

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    It's obvious he doesn't have any feelings for her. There is no urgency or intent on his part to make things right. Pepe was going so right with his advice but I want to smack him for his last words. What the hell does he mean by giving it a rest? This needs to be fixed now, any more delay will make Molly hate this ass even more.

    I am happy his family is giving him the silent treatment. But I was really hoping for someone to slap / punch him, my heart will only get some peace then, still not too late for it :)

    I am glad everybody is on Molly's side, she should see how many friends care for her and that asshole does not control her life. He is still sitting here blaming Molly, while continuing to bow down to Irina. I bloody don't understand their equation. He turns a blind eye to everything she does and then defends it to others. Pepe was wise enough to ask that stupid question about wanting to have Molly in his life. What he should be really asking him is what the fricken hell he is doing with Irina still. This hideous deplorable couple has majorly pissed me off.

    I know you asked us to trust you, and you also said that you are a romantic at heart. But this is heartbreaking. I am so scared about where this is going. I am most scated about the fact that if Cris/Molly don't end up together then I would wanna kill myself. But after this fiasco, I don't think he deserves her or can redeem himself from this debacle.

    Urghhh I am so conflicted. See what you are doing to us lady, you are driving us crazyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...... .

    Please please update soon, I just can not can not wait :)
    August 10th, 2016 at 08:23pm
  • gill7515

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    Such a sad chapter... Don't know what I'll do with life when this story finishes
    August 5th, 2016 at 11:14pm
  • ak9_sh

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    I will start with the P.S. first - Such quick updates are like a bumper lottery, they make us so hapyyyy...Muchos gracias, keep them coming please :D

    Coming to the chapter, I got a little teary eyed when I read this, there was something about it. I loved everything, every nuance, every detail. I loved it. Very hard to pick specific parts to talk about them coz this was so bloody good.

    Ofcourse apart from the fact that he is bloody e-mailing her to say sorry. Like for a second I really thought he was at Molly's door. But come to think of it, he doesn't really have much option. Molly wouldn't talk to him, definitely not agree to meet with him somewhere alone. Neither does he have the balls to try any of that. I am still unable to digest that he said those things to her and then just let her go, just like that.

    So glad Junior is giving him trouble. I wish the child wreaks havoc for Irina and Cris and Olga...
    August 5th, 2016 at 09:03pm
  • HawkGurl93

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    I am hoping that the distance makes them closer! and can Christiano please grow some balls and get rid of irina
    August 5th, 2016 at 08:36pm