Sobbing because this is simply breathtaking. You can work some serious magic on your chapter build-ups and the last line gets me every time! I'm so curious to know how Fei's life is changed by Byunghun Lee. The onomatopoeic tick-ticking is a marvellous effect which really helps us to understand how every event which has happened only shortens the time for her ticking patience to explode.
I find it to be a super cool idea that Fei's brother is a cop - he's really got an even trickier situation at hand due to his chosen line of work.
Sobbing because this is simply breathtaking. You can work some serious magic on your chapter build-ups and the last line gets me every time! I'm so curious to know how Fei's life is changed by Byunghun Lee. The onomatopoeic tick-ticking is a marvellous effect which really helps us to understand how every event which has happened only shortens the time for her ticking patience to explode.
I find it to be a super cool idea that Fei's brother is a cop - he's really got an even trickier situation at hand due to his chosen line of work.