The Price We Pay - Comments

Omg I'm a wreck just like I said I'll be after reading this! D:

Absolute love it and I'm glad kellin has vic to take care if him. Sad to see it end but excited for the squeal too!! :p

@ cloud_3
That's okay xD

Well, you'll have to see :P

"You took my hand and we both started running..." (Sorry I had to)

They better not die, can not deal with that shit!

It better not be Vic's kid!

How can anyone unsubscribe, this story's awesome :p

@ GiveMeTheKEYS!
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Glad you're enjoying the updates! Been worried about them to be honest! I should update when I know what I want in the next chapter :) xx

Hooooo my gosh a diary. Oh boy. I'm bucking up. Shit is about to go down. I am prepared to feel heartbroken. I mean they have no right, but I've wanted answers for so long and I'm sure they have to and this is so exciting.

AND POOR GODDAMN KELLIN. UGH. Little guy. Still don't think I've forgiven Vic because whatthefuckkkkk with the sexual assault but I'm glad he's not making excuses and mike isnt letting him off too easy.

Great update!! Lovely as always!!

Ho.ly.shitballs. Well this is just insane. Shit got real fucked real fast in that almost-rape scene. Like damn. makes me a little less on board with Vic and a little more on board with Oli. Dude kellin has seen some shit. Thanks for updating though! And that sucks about your relationship, man. It'll get better!! The beginnings always the worst.

What are you talking about Gem, this chapter is amazing!

Oli though <3 losing his shit and beating Vic to protect Kellin <3 but then gets hurt by Kellin yet again <\3 :( poor Oli

@ GiveMeTheKEYS!
I have a super dark mind... Uh, yeah, sorry if that makes you uncomfortable. You'll see why he can't tell the police though. All will be explained, promise :)

Jesus fuck that was dark, gem. I feel a bad type of way inside. Ugh, poor little kellin. And Vic is just so damn great and adorable and great, and it's gonna get all fucked up and DAMMIT, lady. Fucking Ronnie.

This whole situation sounds super weird though. Like how can someone ELSE have sold a person into this and why can't he tell police? I feel sad.

Thanks for updating though. Needed a dose of depression today, lol. Still love this story.

Ohhhh shiiiiit. Oh god it's happening. Kellins a hoe. Oh god. And he told Vic. I feel so satisfied and yet so anxious at the same time. Oh how exciting! Thanks for updating!! I love this story.

Side note, josh with Oli is breaking my heart.

@ GiveMeTheKEYS!
*Blushes* Thank you. I was seriously so nervous about updating this :)

Daaaaaaaaaaang. Like daaaang. It is toasty in here. Thanks for updating. What a pairing, those two. <3

Deffo worth the wait! :) fransykes forever <3

@ GiveMeTheKEYS!
Haha! I have started the next chapter but I can't seem to get it right! Don't worry, Kellin will confide in someone soon! :) x

Yasss I loved Josh's POV. And young lady, if you think you can set up a josh/oli sex scene and then just walk away from it I have news for you! Ugh, but I love Kellic too.

Great chapter though!! Thank you so much for updating! I NEED NEED NEED Kellin to explain to SOMEBODY so he and Vic can be in love forever and ever amen.

@ cloud_3
Thank you! I just wrote and wrote and wrote! It wasn't even meant to be that long! xD

Omg all my feels have been crushed! :( <\3 poor poor Oli! I just want to give him a big hug! I really liked this chapter even tho my emotions are everywhere now haha. And how cute is Josh being all protective <3

@ cloud_3
I quite like that idea! And yeah, Kellin will get happier, I promise xD

Another Oli pov sounds good or maybe even a paragraph on Josh's pov? Oli could maybe catch Kellin and Vic together, like holding hands or kissing or something and Oli gets his heartbroken and runs to Josh. I dunno just an idea if you like it...? Kellin seemed so sad in this chapter and Vic really has no idea :/ good job Hun xx