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  • Gem_Jar93

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    @ cloud_3
    Thank you, it takes a lot to figure out how to make it come across the way it is... I'm glad you're enjoying this story though :)
    January 14th, 2016 at 03:25am
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    Just stumbled across this story and I really like it so far! So much going on, heartbreak, depression, secrecy and hell lot more! Also really liking this whole complicated love circle... Josh liking Oli, Oli being in love with Kellin, Kellin liking Vic and still loving Oli? And Vic secretly being in love with Kellin.. Lol! keep this up, it's different :)
    January 13th, 2016 at 10:46pm
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    @ Kitty_katt16
    I'm glad that I portrayed that! I was hoping it left people asking more questions :)
    January 3rd, 2016 at 03:40am
  • Kitty_katt16

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    so much left out omg, this chapter has me wondering. I can't wait till the next chapter.
    January 3rd, 2016 at 02:15am
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    @ GiveMeTheKEYS!
    Thank you! Kellin is. Very complicated guy xD

    I don't even think he knows what it is he wants lol. Oli and Vic might have to fight for his love too haha. I also got hit with inspiration for the chapter, hence it was update so quickly :)
    December 28th, 2015 at 07:36pm
  • GiveMeTheKEYS!

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    AHHH hey another update!! Yayayay! But also like nononono. Errythangs so DAMN complicated. :( Ronnie. Pfft. Who gon mistreat somebody that looks like kellin Quinn? And then lil Oli, being perfect and wounded but still not Vic. I feel some type of way.

    But thank you for updating!! That was so fast and great!
    December 27th, 2015 at 11:44pm
  • Gem_Jar93

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    @ GiveMeTheKEYS!
    I know, poor Kellin. You'll fin out why he's so sad soon. I have a bit planned for this story :)
    December 27th, 2015 at 06:28pm
  • GiveMeTheKEYS!

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    Ugh god Kellin! :(((( The poor little cutie. Somebody help that damn kid.
    December 27th, 2015 at 06:36am
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    @ Bandom_Moniam_Turtle
    Thank you. I'll post it after Christmas :]
    December 24th, 2015 at 02:14pm
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    Oh my Geesus. I love this!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    December 24th, 2015 at 06:49am
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    @ Kitty_katt16
    The next chapter is up! I hope you enjoy this ^_^
    December 22nd, 2015 at 03:16am
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    omg this is soooo good i can't wait for the next chapter
    December 16th, 2015 at 03:50am
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    @ Gem_Jar93
    Oh my goooood the suspense!!!!!! Can't wait :D
    December 8th, 2015 at 12:59pm
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    @ chvser
    Ah, you'll have to see what happens haha! But, more drama is about to unfold soon, so keep reading to find out more :)
    December 8th, 2015 at 12:57pm
  • chvser

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    Okay I'm loving this so far (I'm half way through!) but is Koli going to become the main pairing? Or Kellic? Also I love love love Josh and Oli's relationship (even though I love fransykes more) it just seems so real! Keep writing my love :D
    December 8th, 2015 at 10:42am
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    @ GiveMeTheKEYS!
    Awh, thank you so much. Your kind words means a lot :)

    was honestly worried about this lol :D
    December 7th, 2015 at 12:09am
  • GiveMeTheKEYS!

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    I LOVE THEM. I LOVE THEM SO MUCH. Vic handling his little panic attack and the sexual tension and the vibe while Kellin was getting high, I just love all of it. You make me really want a boyfriend, cuz in my head it would be like their relationship. Stop getting my hopes up, Gem_Jar! Haha fantastic though, please update soon!
    December 6th, 2015 at 09:01pm
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    @ GiveMeTheKEYS!
    I get ya! Hopefully now Vic has shown he cares, Kellin will calm down a little and put a bit of trust into Vic... Vic is a lil cutie though, bless him ^_^
    November 6th, 2015 at 10:20pm
  • GiveMeTheKEYS!

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    Poor lil Kellin. Oh god WHY DID HE CHEAT. The suspense, man. Vic's so goddamn cute though. I want them to have like a solid hangout this time, yno? Like get to know each other without freaking out? That's the dream.
    But Vic playing the caretaker is melting my heart. Thanks for the update! Love love love it.
    November 4th, 2015 at 05:03am
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    @ GiveMeTheKEYS!
    Awh thank you. Your comment made my day! I hope you like where it goes ^_^
    October 20th, 2015 at 01:49pm