Happy Birthday - though I may be late. This chapter was fabulous, and I love Lily's enthusiasm about the the desert because it sounded delicious. The details you added about the mansion made it perfect to where I could picture it. You're an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more!
Happy birthday!! Hope you have a wonderful time. Also this chapter was great! I loved the detail of the mansion. Just enough so I could picture it. Well done
This story is so beautifully written and the characters are really well developed. Your writing style us gorgeous. I only just stumbled upon this story today, and I'm devestated that there are only 7 chapters so far, I hope that you can update soon!
@ CharmedLuna Hoped you liked the update! Yeah, I find most of my reasoning for writing this story is because it's exactly the type of story I want to read, and I can never find any. :)