Angel in the Photos - Comments

Glad it is something manageable. Diabetes sucks and takes a lot of adjustment.

Noooooo!! I live happy stories!!

@ WritingInStyle

Thanks! I have two chapters written out already! I do have plans to some sort of drama/delay

@ WritingInStyle

Thanks! I have two chapters written out already! I do have plans to some sort of drama/delay

Good start! From what I can see here you have nice writing. I like how you made it start off all nice and fluff. You may want to bring in a problem like a delay in marriage or having children or something like that, either way i'm excited to see how the story ends up! :)

Good start! :)

You have nice writing from what I can see here. I like how you started off all nice and fluffy. I can't wait to see what happens as the story progresses! :)

Maybe bring in a problem revolving around having children or a delay in marriage! :)