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  • Thatmom

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    Glad it is something manageable. Diabetes sucks and takes a lot of adjustment.
    November 14th, 2015 at 05:05am
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    Noooooo!! I live happy stories!!
    November 6th, 2015 at 04:06am
  • ACupOf_Pudding

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    Thanks! I have two chapters written out already! I do have plans to some sort of drama/delay
    October 7th, 2015 at 05:24am
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    @ WritingInStyle

    Thanks! I have two chapters written out already! I do have plans to some sort of drama/delay
    October 7th, 2015 at 05:24am
  • WritingInStyle

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    Good start! From what I can see here you have nice writing. I like how you made it start off all nice and fluff. You may want to bring in a problem like a delay in marriage or having children or something like that, either way i'm excited to see how the story ends up! :)
    October 7th, 2015 at 03:27am
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    Good start! :)

    You have nice writing from what I can see here. I like how you started off all nice and fluffy. I can't wait to see what happens as the story progresses! :)

    Maybe bring in a problem revolving around having children or a delay in marriage! :)
    October 7th, 2015 at 03:20am
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