The Whipping Girl - Comments

I just recently found "The Whipping Girl". Your writing is really good and you are great at describing exactly what you are trying to say in the story. I love the name you gave it, almost perfect for the way it's written really. I kind of wish you had given more backstory, but I know as all good stories go, that it will come as the characters develop. I'm not entirely sure if I actually like the story, as it's so dark, but I will probably continue it just because it is so well written that it kind of captivated me for a bit. Looking forward to the next update. :)

Hmm how about Clinton Township, Michigan :3

@ AJDWriter

No problem ^^

@ Barbielovesyou

It's definitely not done yet. She merely blacked out. This will probably be a 40 or so chaptered story. Thanks for reading and commenting on it!

Dark indeed. Wow. Poor ana. She didn't deserve to die like that. All in all, this story was very amusing. ^^ Nice job.

I find this to be very interesting, and I would like to know when the girl will come into picture.

I find this to be very interesting, and I would like to know when the girl will come into picture.