Don't You Go - Comments

@ iamamerrikat
omg I'm glad I was scared it came off really condescending.

@ americancandy.
this is so helpful! thanks a bunch!

That was very sweet! I like it. My only pointers for posting on Mibba is remember to use paragraph breaks (I can't remember what the code on Mibba is to insert them, but if you don't want to do it manually, copy and paste your fic into a Notebook file rather than Word Document, and then paste it into Mibba, and it should put the breaks in automatically) and use a Mibba theme! Not everybody does but I find a nice theme sometimes reels in more readers.

Remember to use full stops in the dialogue too!

But honestly, this was cute. Good job; I hope you have fun posting more! I'll try to read them if I see them published on ATFF/I post them when you submit them!