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  • hachie

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    I apologize for being gone for so long! I was finally able to get some time to catch up on your story! I am loving it! I love hoe Eryn keeps Skelton on his toes with her unpredictability! I look forward to the next update!
    March 12th, 2017 at 07:37am
  • tchalla

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    I was wondering where you disappeared to! I hope you have wifi wherever you're going because I just can't get enough of this story... As always ^_^
    January 8th, 2016 at 12:14am
  • Amanda.Rae.

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    LOVE the new chapter!! :) The lotus flower sculpture was a very kind gesture.

    And I just have to say, your ability to describe things is amazing!
    November 28th, 2015 at 03:23am
  • hachie

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    I just turned to mush! It's clear that Eryn is a sanctuary for Skelton because she is the opposite of what he is and does. Her personality is fresh and new to him because she defies him since he is so used to people obeying him. I just love this update and can't wait for more! You just made my weekend.
    November 21st, 2015 at 07:33am
  • Writerx11x

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    Love that you updated (update with a few chapters in a small amount of time) Can't wait to read more! Love the story, still think it is well written, will critique that there are a few minor grammatical errors but they are minute, which I really love because there are quite a bit of good stories on here that would be awesome if they weren't so horrible on grammar-- so that makes your story 100 times better as well. Anyways love it, keep writing, can't wait to read more!!!
    November 20th, 2015 at 04:07am
  • tchalla

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    I loved the last of the three chapters the most. It gave me butterflies! I hope to see more of Maxim he seems like a really cool character. :) Until next time!
    November 20th, 2015 at 12:38am
  • Amanda.Rae.

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    I am totally addicted to this story! Can't wait for more! I am so happy that Skelton finally made another move. They make a weird/perfect couple...in my mind anyway.
    November 14th, 2015 at 09:16am
  • hachie

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    Oh I just loved this update! She definitely had her mind and body rocked! LOL So he is now he is suspicious that Castro is trying to get to him through her since she a weak spot for him. And despite what he tried to tell himself, she is beginning to grow attach to him. I am so excited for the next update! Hope you update soon!
    November 13th, 2015 at 08:39pm
  • Writerx11x

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    Trying not to be a silent reader on this cuz I love reading this and really really can't wait for more!
    November 11th, 2015 at 01:54am
  • Amanda.Rae.

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    I am usually a silent reader, but I do enjoy this story and can't wait for more! :)
    November 4th, 2015 at 06:44am
  • hachie

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    Okay I don't know why you aren't getting more comments because this story is AWESOME! I love the two main characters are just so addicting! I love her spunk and how she stands up for herself but seems to turn to pudding when she comes into contact with Skelton. I am so excited for the next update and what will happen next! I love this story!
    November 4th, 2015 at 06:41am
  • tchalla

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    I was meant to comment yesterday after reading this, but didn't get around to it, but yay! Two updates in one day!! :D Also, thanks for the shout out ^_^
    October 30th, 2015 at 10:40pm
  • tchalla

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    I ship Skelton and Santiago so much!!! I don't think I can get enough of this story, and I don't think I can fault it. I get butterflies in my stomach every time I read this and to me, that is a sign of a perfect story. :)
    October 28th, 2015 at 12:18am
  • tchalla

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    I loved this chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next :D
    October 25th, 2015 at 09:17pm
  • tchalla

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    This is so amazing I need more as soon as possible!!
    October 22nd, 2015 at 02:16pm
  • tchalla

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    This is so amazing I need more as soon as possible!!
    October 22nd, 2015 at 02:16pm
  • tchalla

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    This is so amazing I need more as soon as possible!!
    October 22nd, 2015 at 02:15pm
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    @ Writerx11x
    Thank you! It means a lot to me that you like my story.
    October 20th, 2015 at 09:01pm
  • Writerx11x

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    This is well written, I am surprised that no one has commented yet. The story really draws you in. Can't wait or the next chapter!
    October 16th, 2015 at 04:14am