An Ocean of Blood - Comments

Fae. Stop. I just can't with your writing.

The imagery throughout the entire story is so gorgeous. I love that it started out kind of sweet and innocent, and then started to get more desperate and urgent, I guess is a good word, as the story went on. I could feel the emotion change from the beginning all the way through the story just based on the words you used to describe different things and I loved it.

I also really loved that your language didn't change at all as your characters did, it felt just like a casual thing that he was stabbing her and throwing her off a cliff. It was like she sort of just accepted that even though she loved him, this was something that was bound to happen and I loved read it.

Beautiful job, as always

The imagery that you use in this is amazing and it is extremely well written. Great job!

What I thought would be an innocent encounter between two people turned out to be everything but innocent. I thought it was completely beautiful how she loved him so much and thought that she knew the kind of person he was, only to find out that he would completely betray her. It's very sad. But anyway, I absolutely loved this.