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September 29th, 2023 at 04:14am
awesomely written!!
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Immortality Unwished For - Comments
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May 7th, 2012 at 01:16pm
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You have the basis for a great story but you should try to pay a little closer attention to details :-) In one chapter she's talking to charlie about her black hair, then in the next she's suddenly been a redhead the whole time. You list her schedule which contains 4 AP classes, then in the next sentence mention how great she is for taking 3 AP classes. Little stuff like that that really detracts from your great story.November 5th, 2011 at 06:19am
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so, I absolutely love you story. But in the chapter School...What a drag. you say Ella has three AP classes when she actually has four. Just thought you should know.April 6th, 2011 at 06:38am
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LOVE IT!! It's amazing, I'm about to go onto the sequel, and I still want Edward+Ella. I mean, seriously even their names match and I kno it's no coincidenceSeptember 29th, 2009 at 06:04am
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ok, I JUST finished ch 29 and I had to break last night because I was so addicted- til freakin past 2 a.m. damnit! ok now then remember this name- ANDREE. I love your stories, I read them all the time, on here and quizilla, so don't forget me!! Because I seriously like all of your writing (or in this case, this story) enough to steal a ton of quotes and post them on my nerd-like page of quotes!!!
hahaha, well, you get the point. I ended up just putting "CL" at the end cuz of the million quotes. ugh. like I'd forget who these ones are by anyway- I love your humor. I have to say, you're making me swear more tho. =/ But yeah I have to say you're helping me with my improvement-as-being-a-smartass. wait does that make sense? well helping my sarcasm and smartass comments. there ya go. ok well i gotta finish reading but I SWEAR if Edward doesn't end up with Ella....gr....September 29th, 2009 at 03:48am -
Noooooo! Did Edward leave?
That's not good!
They need to be together, cuz Ella's cooler then Bella =PPSeptember 20th, 2008 at 05:01am -
Don't tell me she is falling for Jakey now?
God.
Lol.
Her and Edward 4eva!
On every single tree she walks past!
Hahaha!
More soon!September 16th, 2008 at 07:57am -
Lol.
A paper cut turned into sex?
Lol.
Loved it!
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ahhh They had sex :]]
yayyy!September 13th, 2008 at 05:17pm -
Hahaha!
Touring with My Chem and Linkin Park!
I smell a party!
Lol.
Love the update!
But they are still denying their feelings for each other!
Ugh.
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Good luck with your computer!
I really hope you can post soon
This story is honestly
UNBELIEVABLY
amazing.September 11th, 2008 at 04:31am -
This story is amazing
I'll give you a cookie if you update
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Finally!
They admitted their feelings for each other!
God! I was waiting for it too!
He so wants her its funny!
Lol.
More soon when you can!September 4th, 2008 at 10:45am -
How can he say that about nerds?
Shame on him!
LMFAO!
Nah jks...I love nerds though! Probably cause I am one!
Lol!
They are still denying their love for one another!
Ugh.
More soon!August 29th, 2008 at 08:25am -
Hahaha!
He kissed her and she's only a minor!
I still think Josh sucks!
Lol.
More soon!August 28th, 2008 at 07:52am -
Brian kissed her
more soon?August 28th, 2008 at 01:00am -
I just finished chapter 13 :)
I really love this story. It's sooooo good!
I'm gonna read more right now! :DAugust 26th, 2008 at 03:14am -
Do0d She should ditch Josh to be with Brian.
His 'sexual' thoughts are pissing me off =PAugust 25th, 2008 at 08:34pm -
WHOOOO!
i cant wait for ella and edward to get together
but in the mean time she should
be with brian haner.
that would be like wicked cool!
and then they break up or whatever.August 25th, 2008 at 08:46am
