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  • Jimothy Cricket

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    You feed on crushed souls and hearts don't you? DON'T YOU?!??!?
    April 3rd, 2016 at 06:07am
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    I dont know how you wrote that without bawling cause I sure as shit just did
    April 3rd, 2016 at 06:03am
  • Jimothy Cricket

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    Looks like Riley got her stubbornness from Dave. Just saying. And I know I’ve hated on Shea a lot in this, but he made up for it big times in this. He actually did so great that he warmed my cold heart.

    “…. its Nashville getting ready to beat the Devils.” – Ohhh no no no no. BIG NO!! You’re rude. RAAAHHUUUUDDDEEEE. But to be serious, I love how light-hearted Dave is in all of this and that all he wants to do is watch the Preds game with Riley.

    ‘leaving them to go play for the God awful Canucks or something.’ – or the god awful Flyers! But let’s not talk about that.

    PS. I love that Pekka is the comic relief. I also think he has a job as a comedian once his hockey career is over.

    PSS, I love that you used the word ‘rigmarole’ in this. Yes I did notice that, deal with it.

    PSSS. Curse you and your damn loop-de-loops. JUST TELL ME WHAT IT IS!!
    April 2nd, 2016 at 11:36pm
  • MMM26

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    You've earned a review :) I'm thinking preggo coming up which is gonna be so special if she finds out after her dad passes. When one life ends, another begins sort of thing.
    April 2nd, 2016 at 06:21am
  • Cupcake1

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    Loved the chapter!!
    April 2nd, 2016 at 05:48am
  • Blasted123

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    So glad that Shea is making the trip to support Riley :) I feel like there is a surprise pregnancy on the horizon?!?!? Love these two :)
    April 2nd, 2016 at 04:53am
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    Love!
    April 2nd, 2016 at 04:51am
  • Thatmom

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    Tough time for Riley :( Agree with @Cupcake Violence about not trusting you on the last loop :/
    April 2nd, 2016 at 01:06am
  • Mel13

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    The moment between Riley and Dave❤️
    April 2nd, 2016 at 12:40am
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    I'm so glad he is heading back to support them. And Pekka was hilarious in this chapter!
    April 2nd, 2016 at 12:36am
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    Omg poor Riley but I'm glad shea is coming to his senses
    April 1st, 2016 at 09:18pm
  • addiegregs

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    I'm happy Shea is making an effort but it's sad that Riley's dad's illness is taking a toll on him :(
    April 1st, 2016 at 08:59pm
  • TheLovelessXxX

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    Oh my gosh, this story is just so emotionally taxing in both a good and bad way
    April 1st, 2016 at 08:41pm
  • umngrrl

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    Making me cry at my desk at work is not okay miss.
    April 1st, 2016 at 05:43pm
  • mammu92

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    I seem to have missed the previous chapter, which is weird. But, at least I got to read 2 today, so that's a plus.
    Shea is a good man, any woman would be lucky to have him (although he has his bad moments, but who doesn't).
    I'm so glad he decided to go to Kelowna before Dave died. He needs to be there for Riley :)
    April 1st, 2016 at 05:40pm
  • Cupcake Violence

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    Yay!!! He's gonna go :)

    And no. Just no. I'm not prepared for the last "loop" last time you through us for a loop the main character lost her baby and her life.... I don't trust you -_-
    April 1st, 2016 at 05:25pm
  • hockeychick16

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    Finally! He's making the right decision for Riley! Also, I hope he proposes to her there or something, so it can happen before her Dave dies :( but I'd see why you would want to wait, too haha
    April 1st, 2016 at 05:20pm
  • alwaysadreamer

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    God bless Shea for actually knowing what to do this time. I literally just want them married already, popping out babies
    April 1st, 2016 at 04:51pm
  • Jimothy Cricket

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    Why must you make me relive the pain of Shea not asking Riley to marry him?! This is cruel and unusual punishment.
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    No!!! not Dave!!! I feel SO bad for Harley! And Shea needs to get his ass up there to be with her. I guess on the brighter side is that she’s not mad at him for being forever and day late.

    Don’t keep me hanging!
    March 31st, 2016 at 06:16pm
  • Cupcake Violence

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    No no no! You get on that plane with her! You fucking moron ! Shea needs to go with her :( she won't be able to face that alone and he's like family :(
    March 30th, 2016 at 03:49pm