Looks like Riley got her stubbornness from Dave. Just saying. And I know I’ve hated on Shea a lot in this, but he made up for it big times in this. He actually did so great that he warmed my cold heart.
“…. its Nashville getting ready to beat the Devils.” – Ohhh no no no no. BIG NO!! You’re rude. RAAAHHUUUUDDDEEEE. But to be serious, I love how light-hearted Dave is in all of this and that all he wants to do is watch the Preds game with Riley.
‘leaving them to go play for the God awful Canucks or something.’ – or the god awful Flyers! But let’s not talk about that.
PS. I love that Pekka is the comic relief. I also think he has a job as a comedian once his hockey career is over.
PSS, I love that you used the word ‘rigmarole’ in this. Yes I did notice that, deal with it.
PSSS. Curse you and your damn loop-de-loops. JUST TELL ME WHAT IT IS!!
You've earned a review :) I'm thinking preggo coming up which is gonna be so special if she finds out after her dad passes. When one life ends, another begins sort of thing.
I seem to have missed the previous chapter, which is weird. But, at least I got to read 2 today, so that's a plus. Shea is a good man, any woman would be lucky to have him (although he has his bad moments, but who doesn't). I'm so glad he decided to go to Kelowna before Dave died. He needs to be there for Riley :)
And no. Just no. I'm not prepared for the last "loop" last time you through us for a loop the main character lost her baby and her life.... I don't trust you -_-
Finally! He's making the right decision for Riley! Also, I hope he proposes to her there or something, so it can happen before her Dave dies :( but I'd see why you would want to wait, too haha
Why must you make me relive the pain of Shea not asking Riley to marry him?! This is cruel and unusual punishment. _____________________________________________ No!!! not Dave!!! I feel SO bad for Harley! And Shea needs to get his ass up there to be with her. I guess on the brighter side is that she’s not mad at him for being forever and day late.
No no no! You get on that plane with her! You fucking moron ! Shea needs to go with her :( she won't be able to face that alone and he's like family :(