Don't Mutter - Comments

Loved it. Hopefully she can signal to them that the "church" are the ones who cursed her.

Original plot. Love that she is forced to remain silent!

@ essemsea
Thank you for the feedback. I'm still trying to figure out how to set up layouts on here. I'm sure I can definitely change the font and font size. Times New Roman flows better on the eyes, I'll see about that!

One: excellent job keeping the SPN atmosphere. It's a difficult (difficult for me, anyway) one to pull off, so kudos.

Two: Spooky plot! Definitely chilling.

Three: I had some difficulty focusing on the writing because the font was too small; the page (imho) is a little too busy. It wouldn't hurt to break up the text a little more, as well, but mostly it was just difficult to read from a font size stand point and a busy page perspective.

Good story, subscribed :)

I can't wait to read more so I can give you a longer, more "constructive" comment :) From what I read, I like your writing style; it's really fluid and just overall pleasant to read. I'm super interested in the dying of old age thing, and can't wait to find out exactly what's going on with that. I usually tend to be a silent reader, but I thought you deserved some feedback because it would suck if you gave up on this story from lack of encouragement or motivation. I really think this is going to be an awesome fanfic, so please keep on updating when you can :3