I found this story in the comment Swap thread and I was apprehensive to read it because it's been a long time since I actually sat and read a story someone else wrote. Regardless I have to say I forgot how much I liked to read... I was at first a little bit confused as to what was going on and what roles were played by each character; but this was a good thing- my confusion made me want to keep reading to find out. You write very well and you transition beautifully from perspective to perspective. I was a little confused at first with the interchanging of the name Wynter and Dandy- because she had been called Dandy so much I kept associating her with a different person. Again all in all I really really enjoyed this... please update!
October 28th, 2015 at 05:18am