Last to Know - Comments

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was the sweetest ending ever

awwwwwwwwww that was the perfect proposal

awwwwwwwwwwww i love how zack was all like you guys are hard headed and you need to get some balls and talk about your issues

Oh no! I hope the don't split up! Please update again soon. Xxx

awwwwwwwww poor matt...i hope that brian doesnt want to leave him

ha val really thought matt would take her back how stupid of her....yay matt's gonna propose soon i cna't wait!

@ oddrascal
Well thaNJ you for the criticism anyway lol, it definitely helped

This chapter was a huge improvement. =D (Although I'm a guy, just so you know. XP)

I love the visual of Brian and Johnny at each other's throats. I can definitely picture them pissing each other off. XP

Omg I can't wait till the proposal so please update again soon. Xxx

@ oddrascal
i actually didn't write this one all at once like i normally do, so that's probably why it wasn't written as well as the other ones, i normally proof read them and then post them but i was having such writers block that i wanted to just get it posted so i didn't have everyone waiting forever, but thank you for the input, i have some things planned to future chapters

Alright, this chapter needed a beta reader.

First, having them immediately run from one house to the other feels odd. I feel like you lost an opportunity to deal with the dramatic tension you created by having Brian get caught sneaking around. At this point, trust has been compromised and it doesn't feel like they actually resolved it, just decided "oh well, moving on."

Second, did they actually have sex or just spend four hours on the sofa? I can't be sure.

Third, Brian started out shirtless, but then Matt takes his shirt off again?

I still think you're doing great, but I thought you might want some concrit.

awwwwwwwww yay i'm glad they made up! i can't wait to see how matt pops the question

I'm so glad they're OK again. I can't wait for the proposal. Please update again soon xxx

Oh wow, how is Matt going to react to Brian snooping through his house? XP

I really like this

This was heartbreakingly brilliant. Please update again soon xxx

:( poor brian and matt :(

awwwwwwwww they are so cute

awwwwwww t hey took their relationship to the next level....and i hope nothing goes bad at val's wedding and that they do sneak away to a bathroom

@ oddrascal
i actually want to try and write a one shot featuring it to see if i can write it lol, but that won't be just yet