@ oddrascal i actually didn't write this one all at once like i normally do, so that's probably why it wasn't written as well as the other ones, i normally proof read them and then post them but i was having such writers block that i wanted to just get it posted so i didn't have everyone waiting forever, but thank you for the input, i have some things planned to future chapters
First, having them immediately run from one house to the other feels odd. I feel like you lost an opportunity to deal with the dramatic tension you created by having Brian get caught sneaking around. At this point, trust has been compromised and it doesn't feel like they actually resolved it, just decided "oh well, moving on."
Second, did they actually have sex or just spend four hours on the sofa? I can't be sure.
Third, Brian started out shirtless, but then Matt takes his shirt off again?
I still think you're doing great, but I thought you might want some concrit.