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@ CavalierDrummer
Haha, all in good time my dear. Soon.

@ Juno
So does this mean we're finally getting an update??? That Patrick & Keziah are finally getting married??? That Jon finally realizes he's still in love with Winnie & dumps Lindsuck??? Please, it's been so long... D':

But glad you're finally back!! Hope you're doing well.

@ antepenult
The mad hatter has returned.

@ CavalierDrummer
I have returned.

@ KitoftheKat
As a matter of fact, the mad hatter has returned.
:)

it's been awhile since you've updated, I hope everything is alright and you are doing well! I hope some day you'll come back, no matter how far in the future!

Please come back and update Winnie and Jon's story!!!! It's been so long.

WE WERE JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD PART BRO!! I hope this hiatus meant nothing bad's happened to you and you've just lost your muse for a little while.

I hope you're doing okay and I definitely can't wait to read more if possible! Take care xo

PLEASE update again!!! I'm so hooked on this story!

The new chapter was so good, I really hope Winnie and Jon get back together. Can't wait to read more!

@ Juno
Awww, sweetie, you're absolutely welcome!! If you ever need in depth, character development analysis or comments, I'm your girl. ;)

But honestly, you've already written about Winnie having these weird feelings about seeing Jonathan again now that she's back in town. And now here's Jon with his own feelings. It's obvious they are clearly still in love with each other. Their relationship ended in the unhealthiest of ways; and now being thrust back with each other so suddenly, of course those lingering feelings are surfacing up. And they never really properly grieved for their relationship, each other, & said real goodbyes.

And although Winnie didn't understand why seeing Jon in a nice polo shirt & jeans made her faint, having her hear him say that he's really over her & here for Lindsey shows that she needed to break whatever feelings she may have left for him, whether subconscious or not.

Also, it's September 2016. Aren't Keziah & Patrick supposed to be married by now??? JK. Can't wait for their wedding, and if it'll be the day when Pooh Bear & Captain Serious finally get back together. Update more please!!!

Welcome back. Missed this story!

It's nice to finally see Jonathan's thoughts & emotions regarding Winnie. Yes, he wasn't too happy about Patrick not telling him she was in town, or that he really is going to stay with Lindsey, but to actually see his emotion about her smiling at another boy and getting angry is what we need!!!!!! We need more emotions coming out of captain serious. Pooh Bear and Captain Serious ARE endgame, but I do like seeing a little bit of Winnie & Lucas.

I am so Team Jon it's not even funny. Lucas is nice but I want Winnie and Jon together. Is that too much to ask for?

I love Lucas but I'm team Jon

I want a bear to eat Lindsuck so badly. I love this, as usual. And hey..... nice layout

I'm starting to wonder if Lindsuck really is an annoying bitch in real life... She is, isn't she? And not cause she's dating/banging the Captain, huh?

I still want Winnie and Jon together! Sob.

How long until Lindsuck is gone? She's awful.

I'm still rooting for Jonathan amd Winnie