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  • TheAntsInvasion

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    @ LongLiveMontrose
    Thank you so much. I try really hard to word things well and I often wonder if people notice. So thank you for noticing.

    And though I can't make it a book, there's a much longer sequel about Charlie and Evelyn. Evelyn's a fucking badass.
    April 15th, 2016 at 07:17pm
  • LongLiveMontrose

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    Listen, I'm still chipping away at this but this has been the start of every week for me. It is so beautifully written, that I wish it was a published book so that I could carry it with me everywhere that I went. You have such a way of wording things, even the droll details of passing days; it feels so real to me. It feels so genuine, as thought these are all canon things that Jo had written for me. I am so sad that this isn't real life and can't just continue on forever.
    April 15th, 2016 at 07:15pm
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    @ InMyOwnWorld
    Thank you! I didn't want to completely rewrite history. Let me know what you think of the sequel.
    March 3rd, 2016 at 05:06am
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    Found the sequel first, but ended up reading this one after a few chapters. I love how you have added the Vance twins into the story and how sweet and lovely the relationship between George and Sylvia is. Now, I'll go back to the sequel!
    March 3rd, 2016 at 04:41am
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    @ gooney2
    Yay! Thank you!
    December 7th, 2015 at 06:20pm
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    @TheAntsInvasion
    I can't wait to read the sequel! I bet it will be just as amazing as this one!
    December 7th, 2015 at 05:13pm
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    @ gooney2
    Thank you!!!!

    I'm writing the final chapter now. My posting is a few chapters behind. This story will be a little short. But I'm planning an Evelyn sequel that will be longer.

    I love Evelyn. She's actually a recycled character from an old story. But she's one of my favorites.
    December 4th, 2015 at 08:51pm
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    I'm so in love with this! I found it today a few hours before work and I sat and read every last word! Please update soon I can't wait to read more.
    December 4th, 2015 at 08:18pm