November 26th, 2015 at 09:10pm
@ wildest dreams
Where the Wendigos Roam - Comments
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November 26th, 2015 at 09:10pm
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Hey you! I really like your content for this story so far, it's really interesting. And the characters that you do have seem like they can be developed into real in depth characters. I just have a few suggestions to add to your technique and some ideas visually.
I think story layouts are always the way to go - and even though they can be a pain to create, there's a bunch of already made ones or you could go and make one. And if you need help at all, I'm more than willing to help make one for you! Fair warning, I'm no good. Secondly, which is important to the reader - I would have someone proof read a chapter before you post it. There are some grammatically incorrect things and some issues with quotes and spacing. But definitely proof read and edit before you post or get a friend to it. We also have Beta editors whose job is to help you proof read. But if not, again, I am there to help.
Otherwise, (and I hope you take the criticism constructively, I'm here to help!
) I really like your content and that there are quite a few good ideas I'm sure you'll discover when figuring out the plot. Message me for anything. Happy Writing!!!
oxox MorganNovember 26th, 2015 at 07:52pm
thank you I dont mind being told what to fix. Half the time people read the stories and dont say anything. I'm most likely going to get a beta because sometimes things just slip by me. I'm hoping the characters develop the way I envision them to. If the genre is something I'm into I tend to be better at plot and characters.
If you'd like to help I dont mind.
The layouts I love making them but I dont have a computer at the moment. Im hoping to be buying one and also take creative writing classes. thank you for taking the time to talk to me.