You’re My Phobia - Comments

You should have kept writing this. It's amazing.

holy shit/ that was fucking awesome...like...shit...i dont even know wat to say....wow

holy shit/ that was fucking awesome...like...shit...i dont even know wat to say....wow

holy shit/ that was fucking awesome...like...shit...i dont even know wat to say....wow

i cried my ass off the last chapter
i was in the living room and my mom was looking at me like i was on crack

I just finished reading YMP.
Honestly, that was one of the best fics on mibba.
And the 'Last Chapter' along with the Jimmy song, almost had me bawling.
Your an amazing writer.
xD
Thanks for sharing your talent with us =]
xxx

OMG!!

That story was the most amazing story I've ever read!!

I swear to God!!

It was unbelievable!

I just loved it!

And you definatley have inspired me to write an original Fan-Fic!

You've given me a whole new idea for the one I started writing!

Thanks =]

xoxo <3

I loved the ending.
I loved how it jst kind of...connected? to the rest of the story.
It was beautiful.
I'm still sad it's gone...
But as long as you don't delete it so I can re-read it then...
xD
*Sighs*
This is the official goodbye to the story then?
*Cries*
I'LL MISS YOU YOUR MY PHOBIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know what you mean... it's a sad ending but it's happy. Confusing, right? Well, I get it anyways. I've always classified endings in happy-happy (y'know... disney?), happy-sad (like this) and sad-sad (when someone commits suicide or something).

The last lesson was so inspirational… and the fact that you'd planned it all from the start is amazing. I believe stuff is waaay better when it's planned all from the beginning, and you certainly did.

I just have one little doubt… did Frankie end up loving Gerard? I don't get it. You say Gerard saw Frank's love for James, and that he knew he could've never loved him. But the "I'll wait for you" and the fact Frank cried… Besides that, the story's beautiful. I'm just a bit confused.

And yeah… I keep agreeing with you and all that "go crazy and make Gerard a tree in your fanfics" stuff. But seriously… Gerard as a tree? LMAO. Frank would be a bird whose nest was there. :P

:sigh:
Oh! And if you ever decide to give writing a chance again, I'd like to know. I like plots like these that are not so dialogue-based. When authors go deep inside the characters' minds… and, of course, said minds are all fucked up or really intriguing. :]

Y'know… you've somehow got me keen on the idea of writing more… maybe I'l FINALLY continue some of my stories (that I haven't even started posting). It's funny how the first thing that comes to my mind while writing is the ending… whatever.

You're an amazing author. Keep that in mind if you get some wicked plot formed on your head sometime. And take all of your own advices!

xx

That was a sad beautiful ending. You write it well, And i do understand the 10 lesson now.You are so awesome!! I love this story till the end. You make me twist my brain and i had much fun figuring it out until the last. Kudos to you for writing the ending for us.

That along with the song, was one of the most saddest endings I've ever read on Mibba.

How did you do it? I am pretty much crying. You made Frankie into some complicated character. You are officially my favourite writer.

If you ever put pen to paper again and you write another fic, give me a shout okay?

And you know how you want original Frerard. I gave it a shot. And I'm pretty proud of my work.

A Hollow Heart.
In Love And Therapy.

Hope your happy that I at least tried to help change the cliche crisis.

Keep on writing.

its such a shame that you're not continuing this story
i reli did love it, i was always waiting for the next part
you are so wrong, this story was original, ive never read a story like this before!
i would love to know the ending. this story was really amazing :(
xx

It's hard to sum your fic up in one word but I'll give it a shot:

Inspirational.

I think that fits. From fan fics like this and others like this (like random problems - strange... I'm not making any sense what so ever...) and I wrote one and it turned out to be the best one I wrote, so I thank you for twisting my mind and making me write something like that.

Onto your fic. I read yours - I would have commented but I had a stupid forum ban - and loved it from the beginning. You took this concept and turned it into something completely un-cliche.

Your use of Frankie, being the bad guy in the beginning, which made me sort of hate him a little, and slowly explaining the rules of living. And what sense they made. When you started portraying Frankie as a little knight in black skinnies, Gerard started understanding what he was doing, which really turned this story around for me, making me love it even more.

If inspiration hits you, and you decide to update, I'm not going to unsubscribe from this story and I will have another shot at your advision and write another. I think you and many other 'different fan fic writers' will change the ever going cliche fan fics that exist on Mibba.

- XoXo Alina.

PS. I would have loaded this message with smilies but they're not working.

:mrgreen: Your story was amazing. It definately inspired me to try and write something original. (I'm not sure how well it worked out. :XD) I refuse to mourn the story, though. What I got of this story was meant to be celebrated. I can say I did tear up during the authors note, though.

I think this was one of my first fanfictions I got to read when I was on mibba. This story definately makes the site look good. :shifty Not that it isn't already.

I don't think I hated anything about the story. I thought it definately had a double meaning to it. I loved how you could never really know what happens next. This story was just plain incredible. It was one of my favorites.

As of right now I don't think I'd read the ending if you posted it. (Curiousity would probably get me, though.) I think what I've gotten of the story would stay more special in my mind if it was a mystery. If that makes sense.

Ok....so yeah. I'm pretty disappointed this won't be finished. To be honest, it wasn't my favorite fic, but it made me cry at some points and it seriously intrigued me from the start. All the emotions you described really trapped me, y'know? And, I might've mentioned this before, but I'm like obsessed with mental diseases and shit like that.

I don't fully understand why you gave up on writing this, but I know that stuff comes out as crap when the creators aren't enjoying what they're doing... I, in fact, have come up with shitloads of ideas for stories, but never really come to writing them. Maybe 1 or 2 chapters but then I get unsure. Damn, I'd like to know the ending... but I may never get it. So, well.

Yeah, I'm pretty sad, but... fuck. I seriously don't know what to say anymore. I'll miss this story :'[
But I hope you know I'm not mad at you; you know why you stopped.

PS: I loved the way you included all the "don't be cliché! write original stuff and go crazy"s in the author's note. I TOTALLY agree with you. Too many of those already; now even writing about rape isn't original!

xx

I like to mix bands together in slashes.
Like...a guy from The Used and a guy from MCR.
XD
But anyways.
I am sad to see this story go.
This was one of my favorite stories to read on here.
And I really liked the fact that Frank and Gerard were both helping each other in one way or another, but it took a while for them both to realize the other was helping.
Despite the fact that there were some grammer mistakes and such and such, I could still get what you were saying, and I liked how different the writing was.
Does that make sense?
I don't know if that does...
Oh, well.
I have no clue if you're getting what I'm saying right now, but...
That's the only way I can explain any of what I'm feeling.
And, please, can I know the ending?
Pleasepleaseplease?

=D

:cry: this was one of my all-time favorite fics, i'm terribly disappointed you wont finish, though it's really hard for me to critize you for it, I've only completed one fic in my entire life. I'll be praying for an epilouge.

*Waltzed back in an hour later after recovering*
WHOO!
'Least we get the ending. =D
And thank you very very very much for those frerards, I'll definitely check 'em out.

mcrlover911:

i loved this story because it was different to the others... because it just made u want to keep reading to see what happens next... and it was one out of 3 story's that have ever made my cry (published books included). can you please write the end of it if u do get a chance because i really want to know what happens.

If I find my inspiration I most defiantly will! *PPSSTTT, wanna know a secret? It’s most likely I will) :)

i loved this story because it was different to the others... because it just made u want to keep reading to see what happens next... and it was one out of 3 story's that have ever made my cry (published books included). can you please write the end of it if u do get a chance because i really want to know what happens.