Derailed - Comments

I miss this :(

I just caught up and oh my sweet baby Jesus... I really love what you're doing with the characters. You can tell there is some development going on and thats totally flippin' sweet! I'm super invested in this story and need you to update right after you read this. I need the fix.. lol but yeah.. I love it and I think you should totally write a side story with Lauren.. But that's just me... :) Update when you can! I'll be looking forward to it! :)

I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S TAKEN ME THIS LONG TO READ AND COMMENT! I'm sorry, I suck. But I loved this! Her friends annoyed me at first but they've grown on me - especially Lauren, she's my favorite of the 2 friends. And I am so, so, SO DOWN with a story for Lauren!!

YESYESYES. THANKS.
I wish I could rec each chapter!

“He looked exactly the same in high school. His hair is longer and he grew a bit of facial hair. Big whoop.” I love Lauren. She's awesome.
I just really appreciate the balance in this friendship group. Amber is sweet and shy, but she's also fallen under Everretts spell, which is baddd. I have this natural inability to trust people who are too nice.
And Lauren is the straight talker, which every good group needs so they don't stare dreamily at boys all day and over-think all the little gestures. Lauren's the kind of girl you go for a beer with :)

Jenny Schaffer needs to fall off the pavement.

MORE SOON? YEAH. EXCELLENT.

Caroline! Oh my gosh, I just wanted to hug her so hard at the end of this chapter. She's trying so hard not to care about Everrett and what he does but she does care and he cares about her too and can I just beat their heads together? Just a little bit? But I love them. Yes I do.

Amber is a different story. I honestly don't know why, but I find her annoying as crap. Maybe because she's all gaga over Everrett and I just want to scream LAY OFF HE'S ONLY FOR CAROLINE. That's probably it. But seriously. What is her deal lol

A STORY FOR LAUREN?! I'm down!

I was going to just read a couple of chapters and save the rest for tomorrow, but I ended up reading the whole thing. I know I say this a lot, but seriously, you're writing is wonderful. I love how Caroline has this underlying tone where she seems to say whatever is on her mind/bothering her, but at the same time she's lovely and regrets saying anything she deems too harsh. She's such an interesting and relatable character.
You also have me just as intrigued about Everett as everyone else. You detail and description is always perfect. It really does inspire me to work on my own stuff. As it always has and always will. Gah, you just need to be published already!

Took a turn?

I'LL FRICKEN SAY.

EVERRETT. YOU'RE KILLING ME.

THE ENDING OF THE LATEST UPDATE WAS BRILLIANT OMG.

This. All of this.

How you managed to write this so realistically awkward, I have no idea but it's perfect. They're so uncomfortable with each other and yet there's so much chemistry. I just wanted to hug them both and bash their heads together at the same time. I love it. I LOVE THIS.

Yes! I'm so glad to have logged in and see that you've updated! Even I wanted to punch Jenny... Gah! Lol I can't wait to see your next update! I hope your anxiety improves.. :)

Lmaooo this line killed me: I was trying to keep my anger in check but I was about a second away from throwing a punch. I had never hit anyone before but the idea of hurting Jenny was growing ever appealing. As you know, I love this story so I'll always support! Take as much time as you need with the updates. I hope your anxiety eases up. I know how you feel :/

Anyways, great update! Have a good weekend :)

Everrett being all suave with Caroline still has me dying to know what's his deal. I love this story and at the pace you're telling it, I'm thoroughly enjoying each chapter. Hope you feel better hon!

also screw u jenny

SO THERE JENNY JERK

I love this. You already know, obviously, because I tell you all the freakin' time but I love your writing. It is literally one of my favorite things. And I love this story, I love Caroline, I love Everrett. JUST LOVE.

Mom needs to untwist her panties and stop telling Caroline what to do, and stop talking badly about my Everrett! I'LL FIGHT HER.

Finally got time to read this! And of course, I loved it! You're great at leaving us with an amazing cliff hanger ... Can't wait for the next update!

This is one of the best stories I've read on Mibba. I love it so far although I wish I discovered it later on so that there would have been more chapters to read ^_^ I hope you update soon!

Aww thanks for the shoutout! No problem, I love leaving comments bc, as a Mibba writer, I know how much it means to receive them after putting so much effort in a story. I loved this chapter btw! Dude I literally gasped when I got the notification that you updated. GASPED. I haven't been this excited about a story in ages! Once again, I love this and I'm so psyched to see where it's going. Thanks for updating! Have a good one :)

Okay I'm officially hooked on this story.

This story needs more attention tbh!