So, it seems I'll be stealing your story's comment virginity.
For a first chapter, I can honeatly say it's good. There are a few minor writing mistakes but nothing a read-through wouldn't fix. And what a way to end the first chapter, by killing the king. Really!! Good stuff!! Great impact!!
Your summary is short but good. That's what made me read the first chapter.
Keep up the great work knowing you gained a subscription from me.
For a first chapter, I can honeatly say it's good. There are a few minor writing mistakes but nothing a read-through wouldn't fix. And what a way to end the first chapter, by killing the king. Really!! Good stuff!! Great impact!!
Your summary is short but good. That's what made me read the first chapter.
Keep up the great work knowing you gained a subscription from me.
-Maria.