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  • peter quill.

    peter quill. (4975)

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    First off I loved it. If you were to continue this it would clearly be one of the best pieces of creative works on the planet.

    Bravo started packing his bags, placing everything he needed inside his satchel.

    That opening line drew me in, it didn’t put me off like some stories do. It made me wonder. If that makes sense :shifty

    The relationship between Bravo and Juliet was so sweet. It was one of the few written romances which made me “awww”.

    Their adventure had just begun, and it wasn't going to end, for a long, long time.

    That ending line was immense. I can’t think of any other way to put it.

    All in all a very good story; good job.

    Sorry my reviewing skills suck :XD
    June 7th, 2008 at 03:50pm
  • purple haze.

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    loved it (:
    June 7th, 2008 at 02:42pm
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