Caught in the Crossfire - Comments

Hi! I love this story and was wondering if an update is in the future?

I really loved seeing them so affectionate with each other! Although I agree that there's no way they'll be able to stay that way. I'm definitely expecting more arguing and coldness.

I just love this so much! Flashbacks are hard to fit into stories sometimes without being too awkward. I think you're doing perfect with them! The more their relationship develops, the more I love it.

I definitely don't think it's smooth sailing. Something as huge as that can't be forgotten over a couple of days. Marriage is hard and you have to work towards it. I think they've still got a lot to work through. I did love seeing them all cuddly, though!

@ InLoveWithMyLife.
Thank you so much! I really do appreciate that. And yes, I really wanted it to be realistic. I, myself, am married and I know that things aren't just rainbows and peaches all the damn time haha. Thank you so much for you feed back! I am hoping to be able to update at least weekly from here on out :) <3

@ loveismyweapon.
Thank you so much for the support!!

I'm really enjoying this so far! I second InLoveWithMyLife.'s comments, I love that they're going through realistic problems while we simultaneously get the rest of their story.

I'm so glad you updated! I loved the first two chapters and I was so afraid you were giving up on it! It seems like so many of the really good ones go unfinished. I love that you started the story in the middle of some huge problems. It isn't a typical fluffy, perfect, romance. It's a real marriage, with realistic issues. I think the way you're telling their story throughout is pretty neat, too. I hope things get easier for you!

I just read this and I really like it! I hope you continue it!

@ Holden Caulfield.
Very welcome!

@ elijah mikaelson;
Ahhhh, thank you <333

I really like this <3