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Oh no, I feel so bad for Nicholas through all of this

Andrew is a little fucker and if I was Lauren I would not even know what to do but I sure as hell wouldn't wear that skirt even if he's on his death bed because that was a manipulative ass decision. Ugh, I'm so torn because I do feel for Andrew with his condition and Lauren needs to do better but this is all just so messy - I feel like Joanne the Scammer while reading this lol. Also -- about your a/n at the end of the chapter BITCH FRANK GOT ME FUCKED UP! I've been playing Blond/e on repeat ever since it dropped and I can't stop listening to Ivy, Self Control, Solo and Godspeed. It's definitely got me in a writing mood too.

You can imagine my face when I finished reading the first chapter. lmao. followed by a 'WHAT THE FUCK!'

Oh boy. That was hot. And exciting. I honestly don't like stories that have to do with cheating, just because it makes me feel sick to my stomach, I get way into the fic that I feel like I've been cheated on. Ja feel? BUT, since it's in the POV of the Cheater, and not the Cheatee, I was okay with it.

I'm kind of sad that Andrew is dying, uh what. He definitely feels some type of way, other than lust, with Lauren, and I'm all up for it. I enjoyed what you have written/posted and I would really like to read more and see what you have planned for the characters! And I feel so bad for Nick, and Chloe... they're both so in love with their significant other, but have no idea that they're totally banging each other.

I'm really loving this, it's stunning!

This is an amazing story. I hope you update soon. Its been awhile since I read a story on mibba nd im glad i picked your story to get me back into reading.

oh my gosh :(

I'm so enjoying this story. I am glad you posted in on my blog. I'm already chomping at the bit to read more.

YOOOOO! I love the new layout, so pretty! I feel so wrong for saying this, but I sooooooo ship Andrew and Lauren. Poor Nicholas tho lol. Seems like Andrew might have some deeper feelings than Lauren initially anticipated, yikes. Pls update soon!

Hmmm. I can't wait for your next update already. lol, going to be a long week.
Andrew seems to be getting too close for his own good.
Can't wait to see hat happens next!

I have no idea how I feel about these characters, and I definitely have no idea where this is headed, but I know that I love it. I seriously love it. It seems Andrew is getting a little too invested in his relationship with Lauren, which could be problematic. I wonder if she needs him as much as he seemingly needs her. I think she might.

I'm curious to know if there's a reason why they haven't talked about being together instead of cheating on their partners.

Oh my god, I'm so conflicted. On one hand I'm like yes Andrew yes but also like shame on you Lauren but also like poor Chloe and Nicholas. I don't even know who I'm rooting for and also Andrew's little snap at Lauren makes me think he may be more than physically invested in this which is only going to make things even more complicated for them particularly because Lauren didn't really present any signs of feeling the same way for him (yet). I wonder if she actually will commit more to Andrew after she gets married, particularly when she'll be living with Nicholas presumably. Ugh I'm just questioning everything here I gotta know more. This reminds me of Something Borrowed except Andrew and Lauren are way more ballsy than those two main characters and this is way more scandalous. It's weird because I kinda like that they're both cheating. You don't see characters like that in writing, usually the main character is being cheated on to garner sympathy from the reader. Surprisingly I am sympathetic to Lauren, I feel like she has a lot to figure out when it comes to her love life and what she wants. SO yeah, can't wait for the next update and also apologies for not commenting before I've just been silently lurking on this This deserves wayyyy more love

Dope! I'm honestly so excited for this

O.....mg. Pls tell me this will be active. I'm diggin it already. I love your writing. It's so smooth and flawless. Update as
soon as you can!

Oh, I do like this. I'm glad for this break cause it means all my favorites are coming back on the scene. Can't wait for another provocative tale from you. (:

While I was reading this I didn't quite know what to expect, but hot damn. Ya done goofed. Lol, just kidding. I feel like these will be the kind of characters that I'm going to love and I'm going to want to punch in the face all at the same time. :D I'm really excited for your next update, hon. :3