Part the Sky - Comments

*cries for the rest of my life over this story*

YOU RUINED MY LIFE, JORDAN. YOU RUINED MY LIFE. YOU TOOK EVERYTHING I HAD AND TORE IT APART AND GAVE IT BACK TO ME. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?

Oh my god I feel like crying. I legitimately feel like crying and I've never cried over a Mibba story, ever. There's like this weird tight feeling in my chest and obviously the only option here is to CRY IT OUT. Just fuck me up. Just fUCK ME THE FUCK UP.

Here's the funny thing: lmao I told myself I would coherently comment on this but I just can't do it so here I am

I think I'm in love with you
Not to sound like a creep but
You're just so good. This was so good. The characters were so alive and so deep and so wonderful. I was all kinds of messed up halfway through because I was so mad at Levi (like BOY YOU ARE IN SO MUCH DENIAL, YOU COULD GIVE ARISTOTLE MENDOZA A RUN FOR HIS MONEY) and I wanted to like pitch a fit like a five year old whenever he was like I AM NOT GAY and god, poor Gideon just needed a frickin hug the entire time. Like someone just go HUG THE POOR BBY

Gideon is all like " why'd you do that" and Levi's like "I'm actually a huge gay nerd and I saw it on Grey's Anatomy" and I'm using this to mask the pain of EVERYTHING

The tension and the chemistry and the backstory and these boys. Like GOD WHAT DID YOU DO. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE. WHY DID YOU DO THIS. NO ONE GAVE YOU THE RIGHT.

frICK FRACKIN FUCK I NEED A DRINK NOW AND I DON'T EVEN DRINK

Crying. Dying. Crying.
This was an amazing read, so beautifully written and the tension between the two characters hnnnng.

Easily one of my absolute favorite stories to have read on Mibba. You have beautiful technique and brilliant characters. I think I am in love with your talent.

I have so many feelings right now. God bless you and God bless this story.

This is beautifully written. <3

I'm going to treasure this forever because it was so good and so real
I LITERALLY CRIED FOR GIDEON
God this was written so well and it was wonderful and I lost myself in the characters and the place and all the emotions about it
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS

This was really really good! It gave so much backstory without ever explicitly backing up to explain anything. I wish I could do that when I wrote. You developed their relationship really well and the unspoken emotions made it so much better. Super great work, man.

HOLY MOLY, I'M SO STOKED FOR THIS
THE LAYOUT IS SO BEAUTIFUL!