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  • kati89

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    @ lostandfrustrated
    Hi! Sorry I never responded to this (thought I did, but now I see I didn't). Yes, I left an opening to tell Luke's story, but I'm not sure if I will or not. I might also take on another fanfic-type story like The Affair. Thanks again for reading! I really appreciate the support!
    February 9th, 2016 at 03:27am
  • lostandfrustrated

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    I really enjoyed this! The characters were all believable, the story flowed nicely and it was great to see the continuity of your stories. Do I see an opening now for the next chapter in the series to be about Luke?!
    January 19th, 2016 at 07:27pm
  • Thatmom

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    Love me some Warriors stories!!!! I really hope you write another. I've become quite invested in this team and the characters that surround them:)
    January 18th, 2016 at 11:57pm
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    Omgggg you need to write part 4!!!!! This was so good!!!
    January 18th, 2016 at 11:12pm
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    So happy her dad finally came around!!
    January 14th, 2016 at 01:26pm
  • Thatmom

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    Pete is just about perfect!!!
    January 13th, 2016 at 04:45am
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    What an insightful, wonderful big brother!!! They are so lucky to have the relationship they have!!!
    January 12th, 2016 at 12:03am
  • Aaugustin

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    More!!!!!!!!!
    January 11th, 2016 at 11:20pm
  • Lolnooooooo

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    Absolutely love it!! I love Luke and holly's friendship
    January 9th, 2016 at 06:30am
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    Absolutely love it!! I love Luke and holly's friendship
    January 9th, 2016 at 06:29am
  • Thatmom

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    I laughed all the way through that testosterone fest!! Loved it !!
    January 7th, 2016 at 02:30pm
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    One word: obsessed Wink can't wait to read more!
    January 5th, 2016 at 09:23am
  • Aaugustin

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    Keep it coming!!!!
    January 3rd, 2016 at 12:17am
  • Thatmom

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    Poor Pete!!! I'm sure Nate won't be too over the top big bro!! Lol.
    December 31st, 2015 at 04:13am
  • Thatmom

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    Woohoo!!!! So happy you're writing this!!!!
    December 29th, 2015 at 11:37am
  • Aaugustin

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    Yessssss I'm so excited for this story
    December 29th, 2015 at 05:42am
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