July 13th, 2017 at 03:11am
Oh, forgot to add this! Nadeen said "Better we lose half our money than a third of it." but I presume you meant to say better we lose a third than a half, since a half is more than a third?
Anyway, keep up the good work! :)
Very nice! I've tried my best to find the grammatical mistakes, but there is always more haha. Thank you for touching on the creative part of the story too. It's good to hear that I am actually writing something decent than not :).