February 7th, 2016 at 05:57am
This is the third story I've read with this prompt and I love how creative everyone's getting with the origin of the marks and what it can do. I think Death just being a brat is just as good as any. I really like that once a person 'dies' the first time, that seems to get the ball rolling and Death just keeps trying to kill them. So even though Claire has 1000 lives, and that should last her a good long while, that might not actually be the case. This kind of reminds me of the Final Destination films, where the characters cheat Death but that makes just makes it try harder.
I think it's interesting that Claire decided to upend her life now that she has this new knowledge of her birthmark. I think for some people, if they found out they had nearly a thousand lives to live, they might actually slow down a bit (they seemingly got nothing but time!), but she decides to live more. I think that says a lot about her and what plans she might have.
I love how this doesn't seem simply confined to her. That there's more people like her out there and she managed to connect with Arthur (whose death I'm not over - I may not have known him as long as her, but it just came out of nowhere and I was kind of rooting for the two of them to form a team or something). Not to mention the backstory he says - and jeez, their final death sounds so cruel. She's already going to feel the impact of a bus and an air conditioner, what else must she suffer?
I read this before you updated the ending but didn't comment, but I like how you added that interaction with death. It reminds me of the scene from Deathly Hallows, with the brother with the invisibility cloak who greeted Death like an old friend. I really do like that touch.