Right Before Your Eyes - Comments

  • joelkanitz

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    @ fala amo.
    I’m so glad you enjoyed this! It was such a silly idea I had, I just wanted to write something funny and cute and light, I’m just really glad you liked reading it.
    April 15th, 2019 at 07:37pm
  • lonely girl.

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    crack!fic or not, this was absolutely amazing. I truly didn't know I needed this in my life, but I am so glad you gave this to me to read!
    I thought this was straight up hilarious, and I like that witches are seen as good in this universe so people don't believe Tay when she says she encountered a bad witch. tehe What a lovely little touch there. Tay & Lynn have such a great dynamic in this, even though Lynn hardly talks, and their interactions with the boys is great, especially Lynn assuming that Taylor needs to kiss her. All around, such a cute fic! A great rewriting of the classic prince-kiss-frog story.
    April 15th, 2019 at 02:42am
  • joelkanitz

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    @ louis.
    THIS COMMENT IS SO NICE I WANT TO CRY??? Especially because this was such a rushed piece of work and just something silly I wanted to do in a short amount of time, but I'm so glad you like it so much? omg.

    Just picture them all living happily ever after and getting married and having kids at the same time -- Tay and Lynn, Hayley and Taylor, and Alex and Brian. <3
    January 26th, 2016 at 11:09am
  • wei wuxian.

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    this was way too cute. everything about it, start to finish, was perfect. lynn and tay's dynamic is a1 and so wonderful, every character is developed just enough to make me feel for them, and i adore hayley / yelyah even though she's got a hella backwards way of going about some things. lmfao

    even the side pairings were downright precious, like, when alex was waiting for brian (I ONLY GOT TWO SECONDS OF BRIAN AND FELL IN LOVE HOW DO YOU DO THE THINGS YOU DO) and taylor and hayley. like, i would read an entire fic about just them alone, they were built up so well and are so interesting on their own. their ending was so. In Love

    and tay waiting for at least a month before attempting to fix lynn and all not only hurt, but was really realistic. i'm glad you didn't just have her jump into it (gave me more to read tehe).

    this is hands down one of the best fics i've read. i love it to pieces and i'm probably gonna be reading it again in the near future. In Love
    January 26th, 2016 at 12:18am