Ignite These Somber Flames - Comments

Chapter 9 might be one of my favorites yet. You're developing the beautifully, and now my love for Frank x Marlowe is growing stronger than ever! I love their chemistry and it's so much stronger when you know all the things they went through together

!!! I didn't get an email that you updated! I could only read a little bit, but I'm definitely going to tell you all about my thoughts on this chapter when I get back from work tonight. So excited to see a new chapter up!~

I was just thinking about your story and then I saw it was updated and I got so excited! It's nice to know what's going on in Marlowe's head. I'm sorry you're going through a rough time right now. I know it's not easy, but I hope you're doing well!

Oh my god, the part where she told him to keep his mouth shut gave me shivers. Amazing as always, can't wait for the next chapter~

!!! Yessss!! She's finally opening up! I'm getting so attached to both of them. I love the times when it's just her and Frank and the walls come down, it's my favorite part. Rima is such a realistic character, too. Everyone is so believable and relate-able. What really happened that made Marlowe leave? Are the guys leaving soon? This story is so addictive

I can't wait to see how Frank and Marlowe's relationship developed from when they were younger. I like the flashbacks, it's nice to form an opinion on their relationship now and finding out how it was formed over time. The characters' personalities are dynamic and I love it, and as usual your descriptions are wonderful and paint an image in my head every time :)

I'm really enjoying this story. It's so hard to find good ofc fics and this one is very well written. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love how she's softening up with Frank now, I love them together already. It's such a natural, gradual change from being angry to readjusting used to him. You're such an incredible writer

I'm so curious about what happened between them :0

Omg this is great! So excited to read it all! I'm glad we found each other's work haha because I love this