Dear lord what a horrifying world to live in. I find this really interesting that their sort of fantasy world is being human and when in reality they're all basically aliens and shit. Very nicely done, I personally would've liked to see a bit more to it and find more out about how this world came to be. It would be nice as a maybe chaptered short story. Also scattered spelling errors here and there but nothing awful. very nice
February 10th, 2016 at 02:10am