So, I read the first chapter the consensus of the story is very well plotted out. I do like how you made her have so much inner monologue - stories without it just seemed so empty to me. There were a few parts where I felt like it was very cut and dry, and I'm not sure if you mean to do that but it's how it read to me. Overall I really liked it, and I will keep reading cause I'm curious as to whats going to happen with Amy. As of right now I just really hope she gets clean, drugs over all kind of wig me out but I know its a real world problem. Good job! Update soon!
February 4th, 2016 at 05:41am
