Layout + Summary The layout is simple, but still nice. I like the quote in the summary, because if definitely leaves you wondering. However, I also wish that there was a little bit more of an introduction to the story.
Content This seems like an interesting concept. I'm curious to see where the relationship between Tsuneo and Eirin goes. It sounds like there could be a lot of up and downs. There were a few long sentences, but otherwise, I couldn't find any major errors.
The layout is simple, but still nice. I like the quote in the summary, because if definitely leaves you wondering. However, I also wish that there was a little bit more of an introduction to the story.
Content
This seems like an interesting concept. I'm curious to see where the relationship between Tsuneo and Eirin goes. It sounds like there could be a lot of up and downs. There were a few long sentences, but otherwise, I couldn't find any major errors.
Nice job.