January 31st, 2016 at 06:15pm
Okay, so I absolutely love LoZ. It's my favorite game of all time, and pretty safe to say, it's my favorite fandom as well. I've only read the first chapter, but I am enjoying your story so far. It's a bit of a mix of Cinderella, Rapunzel, and Beauty and the Beast, from what I can tell. I enjoyed how it was the girl who dreamt of Link, instead of the other way around. And the fact that Zelda isn't all nice and sweet (I've hated her since I was little.) The only thing that throws me off is the grammar mistakes like double negatives and such. But those things can be spruced up nicely.
I believe this story has the potential to be wonderful. Keep writing =) I can't wait till I have time to read more.
Thank you so much :) yeah I know the grammar sucks lol I'm writing on my phone cuz my laptop is a pain in the butt aha xD but I'll fix it up eventually lol. But thank you so much for your wonderful comment :)